Works that need attention
Here should be an extensive list of the submitted pieces within this subforum and how many critiques they still need to reach the 3 critique minimum.
Try to give as much feedback as you can but ensure that it is constructive. That doesn't mean you can't be honest, but be tactful! Comments like "Great read" (unless you truly believe the piece is perfect and doesn't need any work at all) or "Not my thing" don't really help a writer progress, try to provide comments that will help a writer go back and work on that piece if they choose to.
For those receiving a critique - try to be grateful for any comments made. People are taking time out of their busy day to offer you feedback, whilst it may not be quite what you want at times, people are more likely to leave comments if they see that you take any comments with good grace.
The list will be structured as "name of piece/name of author/number of critiques still needed".
Submissions
One-Chan X Two / TheTwillightPrincess / 2 needed
Lä islá bonitä Chäpter Two♥ / above the eiffel tower / 2 needed
Somewhere Not So Old / motnaf-chan / 2 needed
Online chapter book / DarkGuardianBlazerine / 2 needed
It Gave Me Paper Wings / II Bob-The-Blob II / 2 needed
Sorrowful Nobody / s i x s p e e d / 1 needed
Urban Jungle / Brenli / 2 needed
The hunter / DecendantOfTheRose / 2 needed
The Last Daughter / GreenEyedMonster000 / 1 needed
Well, I thought it was fun / sonnydays82 / 2 needed
The Grim Reaper / Haatsukoi / 1 needed
Swipe / SmallFoot5 / 1 needed
After Katrina / Ace of Music / 2 needed
Shine a light / Deceived Truth / 2 needed
Stabbed / Onigiriiii-tan / 2 needed
A Fantasy Story / r0ck my Life / 2 needed
The Breeding Center / GreenEyedMonster000 / 1 needed
And the heart gives up its dead / Amara / 2 needed
The Nightingale's Song / Chinni102 / 1 needed
Everywhere Road / Ballpunching / 1 needed
Will work For Blood / edward_sledge / 2 needed
Writer's Block Arena Submissions / Aloysia Bloodfur / 2 needed
Coffee Shop Fairytale / phantomkitsune / 1 needed
Can't think of a name / DKMiller / 2 needed
The Horror of Heaven / lavender opheliac / 2 needed
Story about a dog / IsolatedMadnessRP / 2 needed
Saltwater / Aiding Imperfection / 3 needed
Basileus / Hemlock Key / 1 needed
Lead us not / Voldemort point two / 2 needed
Tracking Blood / BlackArx / 1 needed
Untitled / GreenEyedMonster000 / 3 needed
Someday Came Suddenly / X-T-w-i-t-c-h-x o-e / 3 needed
Moonlit Journey / -GracedWithPoetry- / 2 needed
If my eyes could speak / Oso Perezoso / 2 needed
Morning Bells / KaylersBaylers / 3 needed
Star crossed / Issari / 3 needed
Folklore / Cassandra Reign / 3 needed
Someone is dying / Aloysia Bloodfur / 3 needed
One-Chan X Two / TheTwillightPrincess / 2 needed
Lä islá bonitä Chäpter Two♥ / above the eiffel tower / 2 needed
Somewhere Not So Old / motnaf-chan / 2 needed
Online chapter book / DarkGuardianBlazerine / 2 needed
It Gave Me Paper Wings / II Bob-The-Blob II / 2 needed
Sorrowful Nobody / s i x s p e e d / 1 needed
Urban Jungle / Brenli / 2 needed
The hunter / DecendantOfTheRose / 2 needed
The Last Daughter / GreenEyedMonster000 / 1 needed
Well, I thought it was fun / sonnydays82 / 2 needed
The Grim Reaper / Haatsukoi / 1 needed
Swipe / SmallFoot5 / 1 needed
After Katrina / Ace of Music / 2 needed
Shine a light / Deceived Truth / 2 needed
Stabbed / Onigiriiii-tan / 2 needed
A Fantasy Story / r0ck my Life / 2 needed
The Breeding Center / GreenEyedMonster000 / 1 needed
And the heart gives up its dead / Amara / 2 needed
The Nightingale's Song / Chinni102 / 1 needed
Everywhere Road / Ballpunching / 1 needed
Will work For Blood / edward_sledge / 2 needed
Writer's Block Arena Submissions / Aloysia Bloodfur / 2 needed
Coffee Shop Fairytale / phantomkitsune / 1 needed
Can't think of a name / DKMiller / 2 needed
The Horror of Heaven / lavender opheliac / 2 needed
Story about a dog / IsolatedMadnessRP / 2 needed
Saltwater / Aiding Imperfection / 3 needed
Basileus / Hemlock Key / 1 needed
Lead us not / Voldemort point two / 2 needed
Tracking Blood / BlackArx / 1 needed
Untitled / GreenEyedMonster000 / 3 needed
Someday Came Suddenly / X-T-w-i-t-c-h-x o-e / 3 needed
Moonlit Journey / -GracedWithPoetry- / 2 needed
If my eyes could speak / Oso Perezoso / 2 needed
Morning Bells / KaylersBaylers / 3 needed
Star crossed / Issari / 3 needed
Folklore / Cassandra Reign / 3 needed
Someone is dying / Aloysia Bloodfur / 3 needed
