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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Erytheia
Reason for Revision: He just turned 26. (His prefrontal cortex is finally completely online!)
Revisions Requested:
New Virtue:
A Friend Indeed. Yuri is a good mentor. Having a number of years as a knight and as a cafe owner, he has met many people that need guidance. Yuri always offers a friendly ear and will listen to anyone’s problems, no matter how big or small. The advice he gives is always honest.

New Flaw:
Can’t We Just Get Along?. Yuri is passive. He often does not initiate interactions. He is rarely the first to act. And if he is, it’s usually because his hand has been forced in some way. This often means he avoids any real or even potential conflict all together.

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Ashton Carver
Reason for Revision: Replacing the level-headed virtue with a new one -- did a canon review on old writing and boy is that one a misnomer. Also just doing some minor rewording on the manipulative flaw.
Revisions Requested:
old virtue -- level-headed:
Ashton likes to poke things that shouldn't be poked, but it's not out of carelessness; he's fully aware when things might be a bad idea, or when it'd be wisest to defer to someone else's leadership because they're more suited to this sort of thing. There's a difference between being an idiot and intentionally disregarding what you know is best, after all. He's a hard person to really ruffle.
new virtue -- industrious:
There's a lot of things you can say about Ashton, but god willing you can't say he doesn't put in the work. Ash Carver has never met a shortcut (one at the cost of experience, anyway) that she's ever liked, and she's not sure she ever will; cheating has a time and place but if you want to know what you're doing you have to work for it. He's incredibly diligent when it comes to achieving a result -- even if he'd really rather not be doing whatever he's doing, he's still going to put in the work if the end result will be beneficial.

old text -- manipulative:
Other people don't necessarily matter, really. Ashton likes to be in control of the situation, even though she doesn't want his control to be known; it might not be particularly scrupulous, but she wants to have control over where things are going. One word at a time, one wink at a time -- she'll get her way.
new text -- manipulative:
It's not that other people don't matter, is the thing, it's just that Ashton ultimately cares more about what you can do for her than she cares about you. He likes to be in control of the situation, even though he doesn't always want his control to be known; it might not be particularly scrupulous, but he wants to have control over where things are going. One word at a time, one wink at a time -- she'll get her way.

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Erytheia
Reason for Revision: For his attack to be in line with the themes of Cosmos.
Revisions Requested:
Old Magic:
The bow shoots a sacred arrow. This has the effect of healing anyone in an 8-foot radius of moderate injury and can partially heal major wounds. The attack can be channeled for 45 seconds.

New Magic:
Rebirth. The bow shoots a sacred arrow. This has the effect of healing anyone in an 8-foot radius of moderate injury and can partially heal major wounds enough to stabilize them and feels as if they are being reborn as their chest where their starseed is located feels warm. They may also feel calmer, at player discretion. The attack can be channeled for 45 seconds.

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Princess Ida
Reason for Revision: Knight magic pool updates
Revisions Requested:

Ida's princess attack currently says:
Royal Attack:
Glowing petals fall around Ida and up to ten allies of her choice feel their energy restored, refilling 30 sec of a Knights magic pool, 20 sec of a squire’s pool, or giving a Senshi one more use of their strongest attack (up to eternal rank). Idan knights are exempt from this restriction; because of their connection to her power source, all Idan knights in range of sight can freely access this boost of energy, completely refilling their magic pool.

I would like to change it to note the change in knight magic pools, for clarity:
Royal Attack:
Glowing petals fall around Ida and up to ten allies of her choice feel their energy restored, refilling 30 sec of a Knights magic pool, 20 sec of a squire’s pool, or giving a Senshi one more use of their strongest attack (up to eternal rank). Idan knights are exempt from this restriction; because of their connection to her power source, all Idan knights in range of sight can freely access this boost of energy, completely refilling their magic pool. This refill can only be applied to one of a knight's magic pools, of player's choice.

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Sailor Murikabushi of Hunger
Reason for Revision: Updating flaws/virtues/hobbies to account for/better reflect things that have developed in playing him. Changing his eternal magic before he grows (because with how he's developed in play, he's not going to use the eternal magic he got stamped with).
Link to Old Profile: here
Link to Revised Profile: here

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Misty Newton / Mystras, Page of Jupiter
Reason for Revision: Purification
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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Ashur Knight of Uranus
Reason for Revision: Current knight magic feels weak/clunky. Hoping to update it to something more fluid/usable in combat.
Revisions Requested:

Current knight magic:

The same air-shield can be formed with the same motion, but it is a bit stronger now. It works 90% for those at his level and below, and still gets progressively weaker the longer he uses it; it's effectiveness against those at a higher level than him is a hit and miss sort of deal, working about 50% of the time. It can be used in bursts for up to a total of 45 seconds.

Updated knight magic:

While holding his staff in front of him and focusing, he can summon a gale force wind to blow directly in front of him. It forms a wall, stretching 7ft up and 5ft on either side of him, and has a wind speed of 50 mph. Enemies caught in this wind will experience lowered visibility and difficulty in walking forward/moving around. It is less effective on anyone of a higher rank than him. Allies will find that they are caught in a wind current that guides them toward the edge of the wall and out of the path of his magic. While the most his magic can do is impede one's vision and movement, debris (such as small branches or stones) that gets caught in it can do damage (at player discretion). The air immediately surrounding him also picks up to the same speed, keeping him in a wind bubble and difficult to access while he channels his magic. He has a magic pool of up to 45 seconds.

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Halle
Reason for Revision: adding in further information on his weapon magic
Revisions Requested:



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