7/10
I like the theme you're going for.. but I think it could be done better. The hat and is fine but I think the white sash (or scarf?) you have flowing around you makes it hard to see that it matches your top. So maybe get rid of that and use a different one if you really want to still have a sash / scarf. I can't really say I'm fond of the bottom part of your outfit either. It just doesn't really seem to match the top parts. The blue of the bottoms are fine so maybe add a gold belt? Or you can just change the feet to something with golds and blues. I say that because the grey-ish brown sort of comes out of nowhere. Alternatively you could also get brown and gold shoes instead so it matches your sleeves / gloves, and as I said previously just add a belt onto the pants so it matches with the whole outfit better. The hair and face you've used seem to fit well with the theme too so no complaints there. All in all you have a great idea going on. I just think you could do better in presenting it. 3nodding
@Rater; This is an OC acc. HE has Schizophrenia, please do a quick look up if you donno what that is, so he's extremely unhinged and erratic with pretty much everything he does (including his sense of style). Also has zero sense in logic or gender / social norms. Note that the rainbow thing on his back are wings... not a background. And the glass balls are things he uses to spy on people / see into the future. Any suggestions on how I can make monochrome and rainbows meet in always welcome!