Atomic Sunday
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- Posted: Thu, 31 Jul 2014 16:14:58 +0000
Dailanie
Atomic Sunday
ofc I forget to come back online after a short while, my apologizes.
I did mean the one I was using, I'll post the avatar for you since I decided to change.
I did mean the one I was using, I'll post the avatar for you since I decided to change.
(thank you for the image!)
5//10
Okay, so you match the theme you're trying to convey to a tee, but its a tad too simplistic and 'half way' for my liking.
I'm definitely digging how you've kept everything black and white, very muted and mono. I'm also liking the directional movement you have through the smoke and the slightly billowing coat c:
My problem lies with what I mentioned before which was the simplicity. For me there's simply no emotion or character to it. You're blank almost stony faced, and the detailing is very minimal. What I would suggest is a complete overhaul of the face and some more detailing on the body. Throw in belt buckles, gun holsters, maybe even a simple backpack (as it seems appropriate he's traveling?) and add some character to the face through striking eyes, scars and a better mouth! Also perhaps swap the cigar out for the cig from Bitter, Devil's, Delighted or Demonic Spice?
I was afraid some of the details would be lost because of the size. I'll have to see if I can stack a spice cig on top of the one I'm currently using otherwise I'd have to give up the smoke effect.
And find a better holster since the phase blade holster is so tiny. But I appreciate the input you've given me!
Footnote: I did a little research, the spice items remove my shades. I think my best option might be to equip the cig over it, even though it breaks the color.