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 Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2014 9:30 am
LoveByLetters Requesting approval! |N| Ferdinand GrimmANOTHER ONE and hopefully last one for a while because good GRIEF Approved! (No! Ferdinand! Don't steal a totem! Das baaaad!) Approved! (I will beg you for RP later! Need to have my little Aignéis bump into people out and about!) Approved! (Technically he doesn't have a title, but the use of one, but anyhow, I'm excited to see where this family goes!)
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Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2014 10:17 am
Approved! (Yay for watchmakers!) Approved! (Ahhhh! So cute! Does he want to meet another orphan chosen???) Approved! (Ahhhhh, Jocelyn! So sneaky and proud!)
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Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2014 10:54 am
Approved! (Haha, I already gave you comments earlier, so I guess... Happy RPing!) Approved! (If you're worried about the law enforcement thing, don't be. It makes perfect sense for his character with the extortion and underground dealings for him to be law enforcement since he'd be primarily dealing with merchant... which would be the perfect targets and connections.) Approved! (Ahhhhh, how does her family feel about all the mice running around? ; D) Approved! (We always need more writers! So I'm excited to see a poet!) Approved! (Haha, yes, while I'm at it!)
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Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:06 am
While your character can definitely still work, there's just a few details that are a little incongruous with the established setting: Sunderland hasn't overtaken the Wardwoodian Scotland equivalent (which has been split into three parts actually, Albyr, Caledonia, and Gaels, which are Wales/Scotland in combination, the Lowlands, and the Highlands, respectively). They're all still independent of Sunderland. Sunderland's military past is not so extensive as Regency England's military past due to the existence of the Wardwood which serves as a really great barrier on both sides, keeping Sunderlandians in and outsiders out. Australia, while you certainly could create another Australia, has been previously named 'The Settlement' that once was a prison colony, but is no longer used in that capacity. Again, feel free to create alternate Australia to The Settlement though. While Lena could definitely be rambunctious and generally more interested in physical activity, it would be pretty scandalous for her to be spending time with a bunch of guys,maybe a few who have different opinions on gender than the majority, but they would still receive a lot of social censure since it was considered a social transgression for women/girls to spend time with men/boys who weren't their relatives without a chaperone (another lady, generally older and married). Though, since her father is more lax, you have more leeway with this. Anyhow, don't feel pressured to change everything, I just wanted to give you some notes and I'll take another look when you post for approval again!
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Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2014 5:50 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 5:12 pm
Approved! (No worries! I think I would like to have someone of mine meet Senka. Who? who knows.... Haha.)
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 7:11 am
Amorpheous While your character can definitely still work, there's just a few details that are a little incongruous with the established setting: Sunderland hasn't overtaken the Wardwoodian Scotland equivalent (which has been split into three parts actually, Albyr, Caledonia, and Gaels, which are Wales/Scotland in combination, the Lowlands, and the Highlands, respectively). They're all still independent of Sunderland. Sunderland's military past is not so extensive as Regency England's military past due to the existence of the Wardwood which serves as a really great barrier on both sides, keeping Sunderlandians in and outsiders out. Australia, while you certainly could create another Australia, has been previously named 'The Settlement' that once was a prison colony, but is no longer used in that capacity. Again, feel free to create alternate Australia to The Settlement though. While Lena could definitely be rambunctious and generally more interested in physical activity, it would be pretty scandalous for her to be spending time with a bunch of guys,maybe a few who have different opinions on gender than the majority, but they would still receive a lot of social censure since it was considered a social transgression for women/girls to spend time with men/boys who weren't their relatives without a chaperone (another lady, generally older and married). Though, since her father is more lax, you have more leeway with this. Anyhow, don't feel pressured to change everything, I just wanted to give you some notes and I'll take another look when you post for approval again! This is great, I will work on changing things and get it back to you smile Thank you for your help!
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 10:23 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 11:30 am
Approved! (Sounds like a lot of fun drama is going down! Yaaaay!)
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 2:29 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2014 1:41 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2014 4:39 pm
Requesting approval! Re-approval Lena & VeraMajor changes made: Ancestry (no wars), mothers background (comes from a different area) , Lena's status among piers, age, and personality. Still thinking about more of Vera's personality and background. Thank you for your suggestions and help!
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2014 10:49 am
Approved! (Yes please, always fancy clothes. Dress your best, dress your best.) Approved! (Oh gosh, ahhhhh, I want my little Aignéis to meet him so much! The little tiny lamb meeting the sleepy bear~ <3) Approved! (Happy rp-ing!)
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2015 9:44 am
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