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PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2024 3:54 pm


The Space Cauldron
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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Haik
Reason for Revision: Would like to be able to play him with a life back before his world declined. I also think it'd be kinda nice to be able to worldbuild and play in said world, as well as make connections with other DSS back before the fall.
Revisions Requested:

Current Profile
Age: 672
Excerpt from Backstory/History: "Dylan was born in the early centuries of the decline and awoke as Sailor Haik in his early teens."

Requested Changes
Age: 1092
Except from Backstory/History: "Dylan was born towards the end of the planet's most prosperous era, and awoke as Sailor Haik in his early teens, just before the fall."
PostPosted: Thu Jan 09, 2025 3:02 pm


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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Dunwich of Neptune
Reason for Revision: Rehomed character, I wanted to change her weapon progression before she gets to Squire. The magic as written is being left the same as currently written.
Revisions Requested:
Current Squire and Knight weapons:
Quote:
Squire Weapon: An anatomical heart made of driftwood, the roots have been replaced by creeping tendrils akin to tentacles. These dark, creeping tentacles do not move however are a bit sticky—though only able to stick to each other, giving her a way to wrap the tentacles around herself. Convenient when she doesn’t want to carry around her weapon or de-summon it. The tendrils only stretch out to about a foot, but are not strong enough for her to hit opponents with the heart (while holding the tendrils) without breaking the tendrils.

Knight Weapon: An anatomical heart, made of dark carved wood, ripples with veins and tendrils that though they cannot move, are a bit sticky and able to stick to themselves to give her makeshift handles to hold her weapon by. The tendrils only stretch out to about three feet, but are not strong enough for her to hit opponents with the heart (while holding the tendrils) without breaking the tendrils.


New Weapons:
Quote:
Squire Weapon: A wooden cane, topped with the driftwood anatomical heart from her Page weapon. The carved tendrils wrapped around the heart at Page also wrap around the cane, and now look more clearly like tentacles.

Knight Weapon: A wooden staff, topped with a larger version of Dunwich’s driftwood anatomical heart. The carved tendrils around the heart also wrap around the staff, and now visibly resemble tentacles.

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Meighei


Bishoujo-senshi Mahou-shoujo

PostPosted: Sat Feb 15, 2025 12:45 pm


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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Tama
Reason for Revision: He’s a Mauvian Senshi.
Revisions Requested:
Revised Hobby:
Mahou Shoujo. Tama is interested in magic, real and imagined. He is the first to test out anything magical he can get his paws on. He studies astrological and mineral names. He has an interest in the meanings behind the names given to senshi and agents alike. He adores magical girl stories in manga, no mater how unrealistic the portrayal.
(This is a combination of previous hobbies into one.)
New Hobby:
Spill the Tea. Tama loves gossip. He has a unique interest in human affairs. He loves to hear about agents and Negaverse politics. He prides himself on knowing everything that is going on, whether you want him to know or not.
New Virtue:
Flatter me. Tama is charming. He is charismatic and he will use it to his advantage whenever possible. He is not opposed to flattering others to get what he wants. Everyone wants to feel good, after all.
New Flaw:
Pride comes before the fall. Tama is proud. He has an inflated self-image and ego. He does not like being told what to do. It makes it hard for him to admit when he is wrong.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 25, 2025 1:46 pm


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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Evren Visser / Sailor Telemachus, Corrupt Senshi of Tyranny
Reason for Revision: Changing Senshi name before he comes into play!
Revisions Requested: Sailor Telemachus -> Sailor Tyndareus

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2025 1:37 pm


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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Joyeuse Garde, Squire of Earth
Reason for Revision: Changing the shape of her third stage weapon before she acquires it, but keeping same magic
Revisions Requested:
Cat-o-nine > Regular bullwhip, longer and more ornate than her squire whip (still only capable of blunt force damage)

Makes more sense with the direction her battling is going to have something with reach.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 19, 2025 9:26 am


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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Super Solaris of Catalysts
Reason for Revision: Eternal magic revision, name change to something more suitable + slight alteration to effect's flavor text/player choice section.
Revisions Requested:
Original
The Big Bang
_________𝔈 Solaris holds up her hands like she's cupping something. A spark appears between them, hovering wherever in the air Solaris had positioned her hands. After five seconds of hovering, the spark is the catalyst that sets off a large explosion of golden energy that is extremely hot, and extremely fast. This energy rushes out in a radius of ten feet, leaving behind golden 'dust clouds' and even other sparks of light that seem like stars. For anyone caught in the radius of the blast, they are subject to blunt force damage and the sensation of blistering on exposed skin from the heat. The sensation of blistering will last for up to 45 seconds but players can choose to take lasting damage. While this hits all caught in the range regardless of faction, those who are Order-aligned might find they are somewhat shielded from the blast. Solaris can use this magic only once a day.


Update
Echoes of a Catalyst
_________𝔈 A golden spark appears before Solaris, immediately acting as the catalyst that sets off a large explosion of golden energy that is extremely hot, and extremely fast. This energy rushes out in a radius of ten feet, leaving behind golden 'dust clouds' that even condense into other sparks, akin to stars forming. For anyone caught in the radius of the blast, they are subject to blunt force damage, and the sensation of blistering on exposed skin from the heat. The sensation of blistering will last for up to 45 seconds but players can choose to take lasting damage. Should someone come into contact with one of the smaller sparks, per player choice, it can trigger a much smaller, secondary explosion of energy that will only strike that player's character, which can result in further blunt force and heat damage if the player wishes. Solaris can use this magic only once a day. DSS Magic Mess: Currently, with her magic unstable, this magic hits all caught in the range regardless of faction, however those who are Order-aligned might find they are somewhat shielded from the blast.


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2025 7:50 am


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MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Ascended General Chrysocolla of Moods
Reason for Revision: Ascended + complete magic revamp + characterization change over time
Link to Old Profile: x
Link to Revised Profile: x
PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2025 1:49 pm


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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Wonderland
Reason for Revision: I've had him for a couple years now, and he hasn't been brought into play yet. I'd still like to play him during his high school years, so just a birth year update, please!
Revisions Requested:

Current Profile
Birthday ↫ July 14, 2005
Current Age ↫ 19

Requested Changes
Birthday ↫ July 14, 2008
Current Age ↫ 16

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2025 4:43 pm


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MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Danika Teresi / Themiscyra of Mars
Reason for Revision: Been in and out of play for quite some time, so time to update her hobbies, personality traits, and also rehash wording for her Squire magic. I don't have a record of her Knight weapon or magic, so also adding those in.
Link to Old Profile: Journal
Link to Revised Profile: Revision Thread
In case of Gaia issues--I have her journal saved and new profile written up in a Doc. Either/both can be sent over Discord if needed.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2025 12:00 pm


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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Portia
Reason for Revision: Corruption
Revisions Requested: Powered name Portia -> Dualite
Civilian name Lorelai Turing -> Agatha Sharp

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Das Tor

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2025 12:32 am


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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Maigo Amaya
Reason for Revision: I hadn't played her until this month, and have plans to upgrade her to a senshi.
Revisions Requested: DoB changed from 4/22/2004 to 4/22/2007
PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2025 12:39 pm


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MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Kailey O'Carroll Vivian du Lac | Morgan of Gateways
Reason for Revision: New her, including civilian identity, and magic updates to align with shop standards/make them more playable!
Link to Old Profile: Here
Link to Revised Profile: Here

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2025 2:06 pm


The Space Cauldron
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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Ei Kujou / Captain Akaganeite
Reason for Revision: cooler General weapon (and more of a change from what she has now!)
Revisions Requested:

Quote:
Captain Weapon: A wakizashi

General Weapon: A proper katana


to

Quote:
Captain Weapon: A wakizashi

General Weapon: A stylized naginata, themed with fire and camellia blossoms
PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2025 12:27 am


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MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Kiyoshi Sakurazawa / Eternal Murikabushi of Hunger
Reason for Revision: 1. His civ profile is unwieldy and unnecessarily intimidating. And 2. I wanted to see if I could do it.
Link to Old Profile: here (previous revision quest)
Link to Revised Profile: here!

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