Alexander J Luthor
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If you think BDSM is a form of unhealthy abuse you need to do more research TBH.
Agreed. Although I very much doubt she did much, if any research.
The only BDSM she knows is probably the BDSM off of 50 Shades. and it's not BDSM, it's... abuse.
As for the topic on hand, OP's off her rocker. There's already been a few people in here that participate in it that have gone over what it's about. It just sounds like OP's got a case of "Stop liking what I don't like and understand!"
If you'd like the best example, I'll give you this: GEHAYI and KET MAKURA spork FSoG, chapter 12 part 1. There's a table of contents at the bottom, but 12 is noted to be one of THE WORST chapters, followed by 16, though the book in its entirety is pretty damn horrible. I mean s**t, he practically rapes her at HIS PARENTS' HOUSE. "How is that worse than twelve," you ask? By all means, check this crap out. The review has actual text from the book.
Hell, I'll give you a snippet right from the top of this chapter if you're not sure you want to read. WARNING: it's ******** up.
Quote:
I need to tell him what’s okay and what isn’t. I need to email him my thoughts, and then we can discuss these on Wednesday.
HYPERVENTILATION: 74
KET: HE IS JUST GOING TO TELL YOU WHAT HE WANTS—NAMELY, TO BREAK YOU AT HIS HEEL.
GEHAYI: Ana heads back to the apartment, commenting that “Kate has been shopping, as only she can, for clothes for her holiday to Barbados” because Ana, despite being American, is unaware that an American would say “her vacation to Barbados” instead.
KEY AND TRUMPETS: 20
She then complains that Kate trying on clothes couldn’t make her “feel any more inadequate.” Because everything is all about her. After taking the time to tear down another woman for no reason, Ana sends an email to Gaston:
Okay, I’ve seen enough.
It was nice knowing you.
Ana
KET: Which is the smartest thing she does in the whole book.
GEHAYI: Now, Ana has been pretty appalled by BDSM for the past couple of chapters, so her email is more than credible. The problem is that her previously stated plan was to go through the contract and negotiate for what she wanted. So telling Gaston “OH HELL NO” makes no sense. And Ana’s next statement makes even less:
I press send, hugging myself, laughing at my little joke.
KET: Uh…what’s the…joke? Was she just kidding about saying no?
GEHAYI: According to her, yes. But…WHY WOULD SHE DO THIS? Seriously, WHY? This is not a man who takes rejection well! And it’s not as if turning down a relationship that you want BEFORE you negotiate its boundaries is a great idea! Not to mention that once Ana realizes that Gaston won’t like that message, she panics.
Will he find it as funny? Oh s**t – probably not. Christian Grey is not famed for his sense of humor. But I know it exists, I’ve experienced it. Perhaps I’ve gone too far.
BUT HE WAS SO NORMAL: 34
LOVE ME OR ELSE: 17
GEHAYI: Ana, if you’re scared of how he’s going to react to “No, I’m not interested,” that’s not a good sign.
KET: Does she not realize that tone doesn’t convey all that well through text? I would assume she meant exactly what she said, not that it was a joke! She didn’t even put “LOL” at the end!
GEHAYI: Apparently she does not! And Gaston does not answer. Ana—who remains an idiot—does not bother to send a second email telling him to ignore the first one or saying, “That was just my little joke.” Instead, she packs her books and then starts going through the contract line by line. You know—the contract that she just turned down?
Then, about a half hour later, this happens.
I don’t know why I glance up, maybe I catch a slight movement from the corner of my eye, I don’t know, but when I do, he’s standing in the doorway of my bedroom watching me intently.
BUT HE WAS SO NORMAL: 35
KET: That is so ******** creepy. Does she not realize that’s how horror movies start?!
GEHAYI: And it gets worse. Ana assumes that Kate let him in. WRONG. As a matter of fact, when Kate finds out that Gaston was in the apartment, she assumes that Ana invited him over and let him in. Ergo, neither of them did.
KET: Ergo, he broke in. ERGO, ONE OF THEM SHOULD CALL THE COPS RIGHT ******** NOW.
HYPERVENTILATION: 74
KET: HE IS JUST GOING TO TELL YOU WHAT HE WANTS—NAMELY, TO BREAK YOU AT HIS HEEL.
GEHAYI: Ana heads back to the apartment, commenting that “Kate has been shopping, as only she can, for clothes for her holiday to Barbados” because Ana, despite being American, is unaware that an American would say “her vacation to Barbados” instead.
KEY AND TRUMPETS: 20
She then complains that Kate trying on clothes couldn’t make her “feel any more inadequate.” Because everything is all about her. After taking the time to tear down another woman for no reason, Ana sends an email to Gaston:
Okay, I’ve seen enough.
It was nice knowing you.
Ana
KET: Which is the smartest thing she does in the whole book.
GEHAYI: Now, Ana has been pretty appalled by BDSM for the past couple of chapters, so her email is more than credible. The problem is that her previously stated plan was to go through the contract and negotiate for what she wanted. So telling Gaston “OH HELL NO” makes no sense. And Ana’s next statement makes even less:
I press send, hugging myself, laughing at my little joke.
KET: Uh…what’s the…joke? Was she just kidding about saying no?
GEHAYI: According to her, yes. But…WHY WOULD SHE DO THIS? Seriously, WHY? This is not a man who takes rejection well! And it’s not as if turning down a relationship that you want BEFORE you negotiate its boundaries is a great idea! Not to mention that once Ana realizes that Gaston won’t like that message, she panics.
Will he find it as funny? Oh s**t – probably not. Christian Grey is not famed for his sense of humor. But I know it exists, I’ve experienced it. Perhaps I’ve gone too far.
BUT HE WAS SO NORMAL: 34
LOVE ME OR ELSE: 17
GEHAYI: Ana, if you’re scared of how he’s going to react to “No, I’m not interested,” that’s not a good sign.
KET: Does she not realize that tone doesn’t convey all that well through text? I would assume she meant exactly what she said, not that it was a joke! She didn’t even put “LOL” at the end!
GEHAYI: Apparently she does not! And Gaston does not answer. Ana—who remains an idiot—does not bother to send a second email telling him to ignore the first one or saying, “That was just my little joke.” Instead, she packs her books and then starts going through the contract line by line. You know—the contract that she just turned down?
Then, about a half hour later, this happens.
I don’t know why I glance up, maybe I catch a slight movement from the corner of my eye, I don’t know, but when I do, he’s standing in the doorway of my bedroom watching me intently.
BUT HE WAS SO NORMAL: 35
KET: That is so ******** creepy. Does she not realize that’s how horror movies start?!
GEHAYI: And it gets worse. Ana assumes that Kate let him in. WRONG. As a matter of fact, when Kate finds out that Gaston was in the apartment, she assumes that Ana invited him over and let him in. Ergo, neither of them did.
KET: Ergo, he broke in. ERGO, ONE OF THEM SHOULD CALL THE COPS RIGHT ******** NOW.