Wolf Mother

• Artist: jellykans
• Description:
• Date: 11/12/2009
• Tags: wolf mother cubless enslavement

Tall two-legged one
bald bodied
smelling of those
who use guns
and steel traps
which tear legs

Why do you
cage me
and stare at me
and feed me
dead meat
rotting
no longer fresh
from the hunt?

Comments

[MykalAdams]

Very nice. Its got feeling. =]
xx
Read some of mine >.<

[vampiricwolf13]

i absolutely love it, it really spoke to me, great job, keep writing, you have a talent ^^

[Aribis]

It is good, but it's seems...halting. Rhythm reminds me of a car that jerks on the brakes over and over...like a teenage learning to drive XD. But it's nice, very refreshing.

[The Gift Shinobi]

Quite the interesting piece. The format is rather telling and adds quite an atmosphere. The words are rather simple, but all the more make it sound wild and add to the feeling. The descriptions are great!