Kill Me So

• Artist: l rosie-posie l
• Description: This is a poem I wrote, after breaking up with my first boyfriend. Turn's out the guy was only going out with me because of a dare. So, I broke up with him (of course), and I still think he's a butt face to this day. I got a C+ on this poem, the teacher said that I needed to write about "happier" things. Now, don't forget to comment. Don't be to mean though, please? And, do you think that I deserved the C+ or should it have been higher?
• Date: 02/17/2009
• Tags: kill love broken heart

I'm tired of this
I'll let you go
Even if it kills me so

I would fight for you
Night and day
But now it's gay
So I'll give up this stupid fight

She can have you
I'm done with this
Go on your way
I hope your both be blissed

Even if it's all for fun
You mean more to me hun
I can't say a thing
Afread of what they think

I'm tired of this
I'll let you go
Even if it kills me so

Comments

[vanessaw14]

ugh!! write about happier things??? newsflash. life isn't always happy. you should go to the principle and demand that this guy open up to artistic developement!!! that was great poetry.. poetry is from the heart. and asking someone to close up there heart and put on a mask of happy lies to keep away what you want to let out by affecting your future? he's a doosh. you deserved an A

[AceOfTheHeart]

you deserved at least an a-

[kiralight1324]

poetry is a means to express emotions. what you wrote is doing excatly that. tell your teacher to go back to school or get a job that really suits his ignorance. by the way i love it just like the others.

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

nice i liked it ^^