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The Love
The familiar feelings wash over me again
I wonder if my heart plays tricks on me
This always happens, but is it true this time?
It maybe just a reminder of what won't be
Trying to fool me into thinking I have a chance
Heart beating faster at the though of her
My mind grows ever dizzier,
My feelings, so hard to explain,
The soul aches and cries whenever I see
The image of loveliness that's before me
I wait day by day
To see what will happen
To see if I have a chance
Dying a little each day
And loving her from a far
I try to show her I care,
That I won't hurt her
That she means the world to me,
That I won't leave her
I don't take risks afraid
That i'll lose what i do have with her,
Cherishing every moment that I spend with her
Even if she's not mine
Thinking that she deserves better
With every guy she dated
They never treated her right,
So, i'm the one they always hated
Even thinking she deserves better than me,
But hoping she won't go for better,
Hoping she'll go for me
- by godofdevil13 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/16/2009 |
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- Title: The Love(ReadtheDescription1st
- Artist: godofdevil13
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Description:
I know the title isn't original but give it a chance.
I wrote this when i was in like 8th grade or so and i put my heart and soul into this piece because i wrote it about the feelings i had about this girl that i thought i loved, but it just didn't work out
Well, hope u enjoy
- Date: 06/16/2009
- Tags: love sadness happy poem
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Comments (7 Comments)
- zombieeva - 11/28/2010
- This is fantastic! Brilliant poem... 5/5
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- Jippofarmer - 06/17/2009
- Really good poem..hits that spot in your heart, just damn..you should keep writing.
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- ninjagirl1992 - 06/17/2009
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wow. o.o this poem is so deep. it's fantastic.
you did a really great job with this poem. i hope you keep writing.
you are really great at it. ^_^ - Report As Spam
- Natsumei - 06/17/2009
- I kinda like the meaning of the last stanza..
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- the duduls - 06/16/2009
- .....so deep...i like it....
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- EvannaAngie - 06/16/2009
- .. whoaa. deep. it's brilliant! (: great job!
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- chibi paupau - 06/16/2009
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wow it's amazing..you've really got a talent for writing
i like it heart - Report As Spam