love to dust

• Artist: ZecarZera
• Description: love is powerful enough to leave u dead
  this is a story style writing poem
  its hard to write
  and its hard to understand i know
  but it takes alot to know what time of place
  this one was in my life, this poem should say that
  love could leave u lost- which is the point of this poem
  it suposed to leave u lost at the end. :heart:
• Date: 10/08/2008
• Tags: depressing dark love

love is a strong word,
with live up ahead,
like the way of the sword,
love could end up beheading u

we're single for a time
or fine a rythim,
for a love difine
in this world of mine

i get lost as a sheep,
yet get as wise as a wolf;
to either get lost,
or rob a soul

now that it has came
the time to find
who it really was
but now i found out
he came to my plea for help
but i just lay there
depressed of death
for he loves me no more

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

well I for one DO understand! people have to be cautious bout others or the people u care for or even urseslf will get hurt. i endure much pain cause of one of the best love u can get...ur family. yes...now ive been lost for years but trying hard to find my way. u learn from experience!

[Unfound Dreams]

I get it. I do. And the kid is right, the part in the middle about you being a sheep and he a wolf, it did get alittle random. Next time, try to stay on focus. And remember I'm telling you what I think would be alittle better.

[QUACK on CRACK]

Sorry, I don't really get it. Maybe I'm not concentrating enough or something, but it gets kinda random.

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

"Depressed of death."

Summed up this pointless, poorly-written, cliche poem in three words. Good job.