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Sitting here in bed.
Counting the shiney lead.
Wondering where it all went wrong.
Hearing her words echo like a gong.
She yells and screams.
Her words like ray beams.
They cut into my brain.
Now I have to refrain.
I fell her harsh slap.
Sounding like a clap.
Hitting me in the face.
My heart begins to race.
I watch her open the door.
She calls me a man-whore.
She turns and walks out.
The barrel is short and stout.
I try not to think about it.
My mind yells 'Oh s**t'.
I raise the Colt '45.
Brain buzzing like a bee hive.
In ten seconds i'll be done.
Bang,goes the shiney gun.
- by Dormant Insanity |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/23/2009 |
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- Title: Out with a bang.
- Artist: Dormant Insanity
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Description:
why'd he shoot himself?
pretty easy to guess xD - Date: 05/23/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Ethereal Space - 07/26/2012
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Nifty ^~^
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- Kio Takenowa - 11/10/2009
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Haha Man-whore, your good.
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- Dormant Insanity - 05/26/2009
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meh,twas 12 pm when i was writing it >_<
i was desperate to find rhyming words xD - Report As Spam
- Mugentsuki - 05/26/2009
- Um... yeah. Take more time for the rhymes. Or go complete free verse. Your rhymes ruined it for me. A gong? Her words like "ray beams"? Seriously. It is good, but you try too hard.
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- Dormant Insanity - 05/24/2009
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thanx.'tis what happens when your in love >_<
And i only have one more.'tis alrayd up. - Report As Spam
- gelaaaaa - 05/24/2009
- nice composition... i like it... i pity the man/boy... why did he have to shoot himself, by just being left by a girl? there's more to life than just a girl... anyway, make more poems... you have the talent... >.<
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