Life

• Artist: Emori-Chan
• Description: I wrote this after one life changing night at my friend, Elizabeth's House. She had been going through a really hard time, & and started abusing herself with, sharp objects. On the night she almost killed herself, I was there. She is now on the beautiful road of recovery, and almost completely her old self again.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: life razor death

Life
One last valuable thing, life
so please put down that kinfe

Don't make that last and final line
everything may not be fine

but we can work this out
please dont have a doubt

so hand me that sharp blade
this is not a charade

If something were to happen you
what do you think I'd do?

Comments

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I agree that it's heart-wrenching. However, I don't care for the format particularly. I dislike how randomly a line with me long with lots of syllables and then be really short. I do like the passion though. 3/5
And ZenLee, you shouldn't rate based on if you can relate.

[XDZenLeeDX]

i can totally relate neutral
soooooo imma rate it 5.5 for sure.. its just. wow crying