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Hinote Tosatsu
Vice Captain

Eloquent Lunatic

PostPosted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 11:23 am


Well, technically it was made by Lance, so...

If I have nothing better to do, and a profile is sitting waiting, it's easier on all involved for me to inform them of their mistakes. That way by the time you're available again to finalize, they've hopefully been able to correct the problems and can be approved on the spot.

If I ever judge one wrong, feel free to kick me out. =p
PostPosted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 11:52 am


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Character Name: Oturo Yuki
Nicknames: Oturo of the Bloody Winter (Yuki means ("Snow") in Japanese which relates to the clan's bloodline technique, Ice Release (氷遁). The Yuki Clan is a very prestigious clan in terms of skill, power, and most members can adapt to all types of battle.
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Jet Black
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5’3”
Body Type: AB
Distinguishing Features:

Background
{"Oturo is always ready to easily adapt to any type of tactical situation. He cares only for what's best for the Yuki Clan, but is not hesitant to stop those that get in the way of his goals. He is a relatively quiet person and tries to keep to himself and his comrades. Oturo usually spends his free time with intensive training and occasionally, practicing shogi. Being of the Yuki Clan, he enjoys being in colder climates to practice his chilling chakra nature. He does not care for the war going on; just to eradicate the Uchihas off the face of the Earth. He is also very sly and persuasive when it comes to dealing with certain situations. His compassion and love for his clan make Oturo believe that he can change the way of the Ninja World's view on peace. It is only his destiny to become a great adviser and leader within the clan."

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Village:
Organization: Land of Water
Rank: Genin
Titles:
Headband Style/Color: black with the Yuki Clan Symbol
Headband Location: Front

Chakra Color: Blue
Chakra Level: Medium | +2/10
Chakra Points: 29
Chakra Elements: Water
Extra Chakra Elements: [N/A]
Chakra Control: [N/A]

Support: Jutsu below the user's rank do not require hand seals, Jutsu of equal rank require half the normal seals, Jutsu of higher rank are unaffected.

Speed: +1 Rank Speed.

Taijutsu Incompetent: -1 rank strength Can only learn one Tai/Kenjutsu style up to one rank below your RPC's Rank.

Weak Bodied: +1 rank damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu.

Bloodline:
Bloodline: [Dormant]

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Shinobi Profession: Weapon Specialist
Profession Base Benefit: Increased Number of Weapon Styles

Master of Shadows:


Rank Benefits: Battle Instinct: Weapon Specialists are trained to attack in a relentless manner in order to overwhelm an opponent's defense, and when they take the stance of a trained style, they are easily able to do so.
(+1 Rank Attack Speed while utilizing a weapon style stance.)

Genin

Focus: Genin
[N/A]

Jounin

[N/A]

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Ninjutsu

Universal

E Rank
• •Chakra Nawa [Chakra Rope]

• D Rank



• First Element: (Water.)
• E Rank
• Ice Release: Hyoton Jutsus
• D Rank





• Genjutsu

• Universal
• E Rank
• •Killing Intent [Supplementary]

• D Rank



• First Element: (Water.)
• E Rank


• D Rank  

Oturo kenji


Gregar828
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 11:23 pm


Shinobi have to be associated with a village. The "Land of Water" is not a valid affiliation. The current villages are Kiri, Suna, and Kumo.

You cannot claim that a bloodline is "dormant", and give yourself medium chakra. You may apply for the hyoton bloodline, and if you are accepted, you may include medium chakra.

It looks like you didn't even include half of our profile. Please resubmit this, with the entire thing complete.

@Everyone: If I deny you the first time, please repost the profile, don't just edit the old one. It makes it easier to see if the mistakes were corrected, and makes me aware of the profile needing to be done.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 17, 2013 9:47 pm


Sora Hikari
Blue Bird XXXXX Run Around

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Character Name: Sora Hikari
Nicknames: Sora
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Blonde (like lemon pudding *^^* !)
Natural Eye Color: Blue
Height: 4' 11"
Body Type: Fast
Distinguishing Features: A small seal between her shoulder blades, normally hidden by clothes.

Background
A mediocre ninja coming from a family of civilians, Sora has nothing special about her. Both her mother and father make a living by running a simple shop and Sora is the first of her entire clan to become a ninja. Extremely dedicated to her village, just as her parents are, Sora will do anything that needs to be done to protect Kumogakure.


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Village: Kumogakure
Organization: n/a
Rank: Genin
Titles: n/a
Headband Style/Color: silver dog tag with black inscription on a chain necklace
Headband Location: neck

Chakra Color: warm, happy orange
Chakra Level: Medium (+3 chakra points/10 max chakra points)
Chakra Point: 31
Chakra Elements:
Fuuinjutsu |
Chakra Control: n/a

Tactical: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently.
[+1 Reaction Speed]

Long Range: These ninja train extensively in long range jutsu, learning to strike with the most power possible, at the longest range possible.
[+1 Rank to jutsu with a base range over 15 Feet, +10 Feet to ranged jutsu]

Weak Bodied: This shiniobi's body has grown weaker than other shinobi of their rank. While they may be as strong as the average shinobi they take an extra rank's worth of damage from ninjutsu and taijutsu.
[+1 rank damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu]

Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
[Only two elements]

Bloodline/Clan Transplant: n/a
Transplant Stage: n/a

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Demon: Rokubi
Demon Stage: Untamed
Seal Location: The seal between the shoulders.

Demon Chakra: 200
Extra Chakra Element: Raiton

Lightning: The Raijuu is known for it's incredible powers over lightning and transfers this to it's host by granting the bonuses of the Elemental type for lightning.
[+1 Rank to Raiton, +2 Ranks near Raiton advantage, -1 Rank to all other techniques]

Speed: With lightning literally being the Raijuu's life blood, it has taken on many characteristics of it, particularly the speed. The Raijuu's presence in the host's body shares this quality, flooding the body with trace amounts of lightning, which enhance the host's nervous system, and thus give base bonuses to reaction time and following, speed.
[+1 Rank Speed, +1 Reaction Time]

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Shinobi Profession: Sealing Master- Sealing masters are known for their abilities in trapping and controlling. With their special jutsus, they can easily enable themselves to stop attacks and reflect them backwards. 
Profession Base Benefit:
Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own.
(Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)

Rank Benefits

Genin
Carver: Some sealing specialists, looking for new ways to utilize seals, take up engraving as an addition to their sealing style. By learning how to engrave seals, the specialist is able to carve seals into almost anything, from a kunai to a simple stick. This art holds the advantage of requiring no ink to utilize, and holds up much better on things such as weapons than normal ink seals.
(Able to utilize carving. Carved seals will cease to work if the carvings are blocked, such as by a seal carved into steel being battered flat.)

Chuunin
n/a

Jounin
n/a


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Ninjutsu


Universal

Starting Element: Fuuinjutsu (Sealing)
E Rank
  • Storage Seal Basic



  • D Rank
  • Name of Seal: Hiku (To pull)
  • Name of Seal: Kyouka (Reinforce)










  • First Element: Raiton
    E Rank
  • Yurayura Ranpu no Jutsu (Flickering Light Technique)
  • Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu (Lightning Clone Technique)
  • Seiteki Suji no Jutsu (Static Strings Technique)
  • Teikou no Kuntou (Electricity Resistance Training)
    Note: This skill is passive.
    D Rank
  • Heki no Jutsu (Burst Technique)
  • Kumo Keba no Jutsu (Cloud Wisp Technique)
  • Nagare Isou no Jutsu (Current Transfer Skill)
  • Raiton: Raikou Boruto no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Bolt Technique)
  • Raikou Henge no Jutsu (Lightning Transformation Technique)
  • Raiton: Raikou Jishaku no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Magnet
  • Raiton: Seiteki Chikara no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Static Force)
  • Raiton: Denshi no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Electron Technique)
    C Rank




  • Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank
  • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
  • Bunshin No Jutsu (Clone Technique)
  • Suiganmourou no Jutsu (Drunken Sight Technique)
    Catalyst: Must hear name of jutsu and see user
  • Kumo Monokage no Jutsu (Cloud Cover Technique)
  • Hekireki Koe no Jutsu (Thunder Voice Technique)
  • Raimei Wana Fuu (Thunder Trap Seal)
  • Hibanahouden no Jutsu (Discharge Technique)
    Catalyst: Triggered by touching the target
    D Rank
  • Genjutsu Kai (Release)
    Catalyst: Must recognize that they are in a genjutsu.

  • Magen: Kokuni Arazu No Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique)



  • C Rank
  • Meisai no Jutsu (Camouflage Technique)











  • First Element: Raiton
    E Rank


    D Rank
  • Kumo Bunshin no Jutsu (Cloud Clone Technique)
    Catalyst: N/A
  • Tendou no Ashi no Jutsu (Cherub's Foot Technique)
    Catalyst: Maintain eye contact for 1 post (still requires hand-seals)
  • Kumo Yotogi (Cloud Watching)
    Catalyst: Eye contact for relaxation, Opponent must hear the trigger phrase for the second stage of the technique






  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Demon Jutsu

    Rokubi
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities: (Passive abilities gained by training in the style. Copy/Paste the description. Link to learning the ability.)

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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed: 9

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated: 36

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [2]
  • Store Helper [Start] [End]
  • Mail Delivery [Start] [End]

    D-rank - [12]
  • Tree-planting [Start] [End]
  • Visiting Konoha [Start] [End]
  • Work Around the Hotsprings[Start] [End]
  • Catch the Cat [Start] [End]


    C-rank - [12]
  • Bug-Catching [Start] [End]
  • Tea Fields [Start] [End]

    B-rank - [10]
  • Assist Sunagakure [Start] [End]


  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]




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    Backpack Type/Color: tan backpack
    Tool Pouch Location: behind left side of the waist
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: outside right thigh

    Flak-Jacket: A simple, short-sleeved jacket with a hood and dark blue in color. Sora wears her jacket over a long-sleeved shirt. The jacket is a pull-on with a large pocket in the middle, one kunai holster on the outside of each sleeve, and a hidden senbon holster on the inside of each sleeve. The middle pocket is located in the front of the jacket, on the bottom, and has two openings for Sora to put her hands through. The pocket contains three extra kunai holsters (the kunai in here usually have an explosive note tied to them before-hand) and two extra holsters for exploding smoke grenades (each holster has enough space for one exploding smoke grenade), hidden from sight and within easy reach of Sora's fingers whenever she puts her hands in. The kunai holster on each sleeve holds one kunai and opens downwards. The senbon holster hidden on the inside of each sleeve hold five senbons each and are thin enough to not be noticed from the outside.

    Gold: 3200


    Equipment

    Kunai: 22
    Makibishi: 15
    Shuriken: 31
    Senbon: 40
    Exploding Smoke Grenade: 9
    Flash Bomb: 9
    Exploding Tag: 12
    Steel Wire: 10 meters
    Miscellaneous: Fingerless gloves with plates of armor on the back on each hand.


    Supplies

    Item:

    Custom Equipment

    {Paste customs here.}

    Seals

    Seal [Information]: Location

    Nin Shiki Kaado (Secret Information Cards)

    Aburame, Nagisa: Aburame, Genjutsu, Jounin, Kumo nin, Raiton
    Reiki, Aoi: Nibi, Medical, Genin, Missing nin, Former Kumo nin, Hiton, Katon
    Tsukai, Haruka: Body Sacrifice Sensor, Medical, Genin, MIA, Kumo nin, Hiton, Raiton
    Uchiha, Kensei: Uchiha, Taijutsu, Chuunin, Kumo nin, Katon, Raiton
    Uchiha, Sosay: Uchiha, Ninjutsu, Kage, MIA, Kumo nin, Katon
    Laxus Makarov: Jiton, Ninjutsu, Genin, Kumo nin, Raiton, Doton
    Shikaku: ???


    Housing/Furniture

    {House Type}: (Link to thread.)
    {Object in above house.}: #
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    HeadlessKoko
    Crew

    Invisible Regular

    12,125 Points
    • Invisibility 100
    • Inquisitor 200
    • Alchemy Level 2 100

    Gregar828
    Vice Captain

    PostPosted: Thu Jul 18, 2013 11:34 am


    So sorry that I cannot grace this profile with the official banner of gregar amazingness, but I do approve it all the same.
    PostPosted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 11:31 am


    U/C


    Mina KataboUser Image

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    Character Name: Mina Katabo
    Nicknames: Nia, Min,
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female
    Hair Color: Green
    Eye Color: Green
    Height: 5'3
    Body Type: Curvy, Slender,
    Distinguishing Features: None.

    Background
    [Soon]


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    Village:
    Organization: N/A
    Rank: Genin
    Titles: N/A
    Headband Style/Color: It's a belt, and is black.
    Headband Location: Waist

    Chakra Color: Luscious Green
    Chakra Level: Low
    Chakra Points:
    Chakra Elements: Fuuton
    Extra Chakra Elements: N/A
    Chakra Control: Low

    Support:
    [Jutsu below the user's rank do not require hand seals, Jutsu of equal rank require half the normal seal, Jutsu of higher rank are unaffected]

    Speed:
    [+1 Rank Speed]

    Less Elements:
    [May only have two elements; base = 1, Jounin = 2.

    Weak Bodied: [+1 Damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu.


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    Shinobi Profession: Medical Specialist
    Profession Base Benefit:
    Rank Benefits
    Natural Healer: Medical Specialists are the best in their field, and are able to learn more medical techniques than any other shinobi.
    (Can learn all Medical Jutsu.)

    Brewer: Medics are trained not only in medical ninjutsu and healing, but in the creation and use of both medicines, and poisons.
    (Able to create medicines and poisons in game. Medics are the only profession with this ability.)

    Improved Chakra Control: It takes a high understanding of chakra control to utilize medical ninjutsu to their greatest effect. Only shinobi with excellent control are capable of becoming true medics.
    (-1 chakra point cost for E Rank techniques, -2 for D, -3 for C, -4 for B and A, and -5 for S Rank. (Does not stack with Chakra Control Type.))

    Genin
    1) Herbalist: Some medics learn to be incredibly efficient in their creation of medicines and poisons, using just the right amount to get the desired effect, and no more, such that they are able to make far more with the same amount of supplies.
    (Able to create two doses of medicine or poison with the ingredients for one.)

    Chuunin
    2) Alchemist: This medic is highly studied in the lore of rare special ingredients, and knows exactly how to use them all to maximum effect.
    (Created medicines and poisons utilizing Special Ingredients are ½ more effective. (If the poison causes -1 rank, it will now cause -1½.)


    Jounin
    2) Immunologist: This medic is well versed in medicine, poison, and the immune system itself which both have to pass through to take effect. Using that knowledge, the medic has learned to optimize their immune system, improving it's ability to fight off poisons, while simultaneously teaching it to allow beneficial medicines to pass through with their highest possible effect rather than weakening them fighting off the foreign invader..
    (Poisons are only half as effective against the specialist, while medicines are twice as effective.)



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    Iryo Ninjutsu

    Universal
      E Rank







    • D Rank







    Ninjutsu

    Universal
      E Rank
    • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
    • Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Untying Technique]
    • Anrokku no Jutsu [Unlocking Technique]

    • D Rank



    • Fuuton ~ Wind Release:
      E Rank


    • D Rank




    Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Summoning Type:

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Manoeuvres:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities:




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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed:

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated:

    Mission Record:

    E-rank -



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]




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    Backpack Type/Color: Purse
    Tool Pouch Location: Lower Back
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: On top of Tool Pouch but still tied on.

    Gold: 500


    Equipment

    Kunai: #
    Shuriken: #


    Supplies
    First Aid Kit

    Item:
    Wire

    Custom Equipment



    Housing/Furniture

    {House Type}: (Link to thread.)
    {Object in above house.}: #
     

  • xX Screamo Paradise Xx

    Hilarious Hunter

    4,550 Points
    • Flatterer 200
    • Signature Look 250
    • Junior Trader 100

    Hinote Tosatsu
    Vice Captain

    Eloquent Lunatic

    PostPosted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 6:01 pm


    xX Screamo Paradise Xx


    I see you're still working on this, but I'd like to point out a couple things, to save you time later.

    As a genin, you are allowed two starter jutsu. These may be from universal ninjutsu or genjutsu, but must be of E rank.

    As a genin, you can only have one rank benefit. Please remove the chuunin and jounin benefits until you're able to use them. This is mainly to prevent confusion, as what is on your profile is regarded as what your RPC is capable of, but also because by the time you reach those ranks, you may have changed your mind on what you want.

    Please use a... Less suggestive character image. While yours probably isn't quite against the ToS, it's toeing the line, which we prefer to avoid.
    PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2013 6:57 am


    Martin Spiralwave
    Enro Tenrousei
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    Character Name: Tenrousei, Enro
    Nicknames: Enro
    Age: 23
    Gender: Male
    Hair Color: Black
    Eye Color: Amber
    Height: Six foot, three inches
    Body Type: Streamlined and muscular
    Distinguishing Features:
    Enro is somewhat renown for his chilling gaze, reportedly devoid of sympathy and empathy but still able to discern the motivations of a man with frightening ease.
    Background
    Enro is native to the Rice Country and is the first offspring of a shinobi and world-renown surgeon. His father, the shinobi, was retired but took pains to teach his children basic ninja practices under the guise of hunting etiquette. The surgeon, his mother, educated their children and used them as assistants at their local clinic. This arrangement was maintained even as the Rice Country ran red with blood, the family moving through the wastelands until Enro's father had enough and sent his family to Kirigakure where he rejoined the ninja ranks to reclaim his country. Enro followed many years later after developing martial skills of his own but enrolling at a Kirigakure dojo.

    The war consumed Enro's teenage years and his early adult years until it finally consumed itself, leaving a ruined country. His company was dead and scattered into the wind. He remained, spending his days protecting a village he'd grown attached to from bandits until the 'village' of Otogakure was created. For a short time, he spent his days as a farmer in the village, learning shinobi practices from an old man who served as his neighbor and watcher. A man who'd committed so many atrocities during the war-torn era could not be allowed to move around the lands without being observed so the old man served as his handler and teacher until his commitment was proven to the village.

    Enro left the Rice Country for Sunagakure to fully develop his ninja skills, escaping the second destruction of the country by a few days but still being able to watch the rice paddies burn in the wake of a shadowy army. Enro vowed on the burning hills to return once he'd mastered the supernatural skills of the shinobi and do what the fabled Otokage had done his or herself, though he would not allow the country to burn again.








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    Village: Sunagakure
    Organization: N/A
    Rank: Genin
    Titles: Tyrant of the Night
    Headband Style/Color: N/A
    Headband Location: N/A

    Chakra Color: Deep indigo
    Chakra Level: Low
    Chakra Points: 27
    Chakra Elements: N/A [Depends on how my custom bloodline is received]
    Extra Chakra Elements: N/A
    Chakra Control: N/A
    Weaknesses:
    Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai.
    [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]

    Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.


    : Chakra Battery: These shinobi have much larger chakra stores than their peers, making them able to use more chakra techniques at a time without running dry.
    [+1/10 Base Chakra Modifier]

    :The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform.
    (Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post)


    Bloodline: N/A
    Bloodline, Clan: N/A

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant: N/A
    Transplant Stage: N/A


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    Shinobi Profession: Sealing Specialist
    Profession Base Benefit[Professional Sealder]:
    Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own.
    (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)

    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    Carver: Some sealing specialists, looking for new ways to utilize seals, take up engraving as an addition to their sealing style. By learning how to engrave seals, the specialist is able to carve seals into almost anything, from a kunai to a simple stick. This art holds the advantage of requiring no ink to utilize, and holds up much better on things such as weapons than normal ink seals.
    (Able to utilize carving. Carved seals will cease to work if the carvings are blocked, such as by a seal carved into steel being battered flat.)


    Chuunin


    Jounin


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    Ninjutsu

    Universal
      E Rank
    • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)


    • D Rank



    • Sealing:
      E Rank


    • D Rank







    Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank
  • Bunshin no Jutsu


  • D Rank






  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline Jutsu

    Kekkei Genkai
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: N/A

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known:

    Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities:



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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed: 2

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated: 9

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [{Place Total Rank mp in Brackets}]



  • D-rank - [3]
  • 1 D rank mission


  • C-rank - [6]
  • 1 C-rank Mission


  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]




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    Backpack Type/Color: Apron/Soft Beige
    Tool Pouch Location:Belt pouches
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: Belt Pouches

    Gold:935


    Equipment

    Kunai: #10
    Shuriken: #10
    Smoke Bomb:#2
    Flash Bomb:#2
    Basic Sword: #1

    Ninja Wire: #10 ft



    Supplies
    Storage Scroll[Small]:#3
    Item:

    Custom Equipment

    {Paste customs here.}

    Housing/Furniture

    {House Type}: N/a
    {Object in above house.}: #


  • Your weaknesses should be directly below types, as in the updated format. The new setup pretty much adds them as two more types.

    Other than that, approved! Post it up so David's doesn't look quite so lonely. =p

    Hinote Tosatsu
    Vice Captain

    Eloquent Lunatic


    Gregar828
    Vice Captain

    PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2013 2:56 pm


    Hinote, thats enough. Its one thing to comment on profiles that I didn't get to yet, but approving profile a that has not been reposted for final judgment, especially one I denied? I've asked you whose thread this is twice, but now I'll state it: this is my thread, and I would like to be granted the ability to do my job as profile moderator.

    @Martin: Please repost your profile if it is ready for judgment.
    PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2013 4:13 pm


    You denied it on grounds that were inapplicable and proceeded to ignore it after that was pointed out. Besides the placement of the weaknesses there was never a reason to deny the profile. As Kazekage, VC, and the one who created the current profile format in the first place, I decided to approve it, because it was obvious at least to me that he was waiting on your final approval and wasn't getting it. If you want to give the final call, go ahead, but there is no reason to make him wait on it any longer when the profile is already fine.

    Hinote Tosatsu
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    Gregar828
    Vice Captain

    PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2013 5:08 pm


    I see no place where my ruling was contested in this thread, nor was it brought to my attention. Regardless, I feel that no registered primary element is grounds for denial. As VC and the actual moderator for this thread, I find this profile.incomplete until my previous corrections have been fulfilled.
    PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2013 6:05 pm


    Gregar828
    I see no place where my ruling was contested in this thread, nor was it brought to my attention. Regardless, I feel that no registered primary element is grounds for denial. As VC and the actual moderator for this thread, I find this profile.incomplete until my previous corrections have been fulfilled.


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    Gregar828
    Martin: I can't accept someone with no chakra elements. Isn't this an already existing RPC? In that case, it should have Medical and Raiton. I can't say yes to something without a registered element.


    If he doesn't want an element, that's sort of his choice. Maybe he intends to use that for a later talent, or, more likely, it has something to do with considerations for a potential future custom bloodline, that he doesn't want to have to retcon himself on. As his Kage I'm willing to override any denial on the grounds of his not wishing to have elements. Please proceed with that in mind.


    Then you obviously missed it. How, I couldn't say, because I quoted you in it. And again, if he does not wish to have an element, that is his problem. My own RPC has the same trait and you had no issue with it, nor does Kagetsu's, which you approved on the spot, despite some other minor mistakes in the profile. Right in his profile he states that the reason is for future bloodline considerations. Personally I feel that to be a good decision, as he can always add an element later, but he can't remove or change them if he wants a bloodline requiring specific ones later.

    If he, the RPer, and I, his kage, have no problem with what is essentially a weakness with no direct benefit gained from it, it should not be a problem. Characters are allowed an element. They do not require one. As evidenced by approval policy past and present, including profiles submitted after the profile in question. If the lack of elements is your only concern, I stand by my decision that the profile be approved.

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    Hinote Tosatsu
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    PostPosted: Mon Jul 22, 2013 4:28 pm


    Kagetsukiko


    I've talked to Greg in Crew Chat, and, this may surprise people after reading the last few posts, he asked me to inform you of a few mistakes on your profile he missed. (Technically he said one of us should, but he's also working from a cell phone, so, yeah.)

    Most importantly, Fuuinjutsu is not an element. It actually hasn't been since I rewrote the systems for it a long time ago. It's considered a sub-type of Universal. So, if you had it instead of a proper element, I feel I should inform you that you can still take a regular element. (In your skill list, Fuuinjutsu should just be added beneath Universal as you have it, but above your first element.)

    Your chakra element from Raijuu should be in Extra Elements in the Shinobi Info section. (This isn't finalized yet, but I've suggested in Crew making single element bonuses not apply to Less Elements, so you might still be able to take a Jounin element. Think we'll probably have plenty of time to work it out before that matters though...)

    Elemental Genjutsu don't exist anymore. Some of them were scrapped and others moved to Universal. Check the Universal list to be sure the ones you have still exist. If they do, just move them to your universal genjutsu section. if not, the usual replacement rules apply.
    PostPosted: Mon Jul 22, 2013 5:31 pm


    I would like to say, for those who do not believe I would actually allow someone in my thread to moderate it, that yes, I said it.

    In addition, and partly to make people's jaws drop in astonishment, I grant Hinote-Tosatsu the power of Profile Moderator until I get back from hiatus. Treat his approvals and denials as if they were my own.

    Gregar828
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    HeadlessKoko
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    • Inquisitor 200
    • Alchemy Level 2 100
    PostPosted: Mon Jul 22, 2013 10:47 pm


    Hinote Tosatsu
    I've talked to Greg in Crew Chat, and, this may surprise people after reading the last few posts, he asked me to inform you of a few mistakes on your profile he missed. (Technically he said one of us should, but he's also working from a cell phone, so, yeah.)

    Most importantly, Fuuinjutsu is not an element. It actually hasn't been since I rewrote the systems for it a long time ago. It's considered a sub-type of Universal. So, if you had it instead of a proper element, I feel I should inform you that you can still take a regular element. (In your skill list, Fuuinjutsu should just be added beneath Universal as you have it, but above your first element.)

    Your chakra element from Raijuu should be in Extra Elements in the Shinobi Info section. (This isn't finalized yet, but I've suggested in Crew making single element bonuses not apply to Less Elements, so you might still be able to take a Jounin element. Think we'll probably have plenty of time to work it out before that matters though...)

    Elemental Genjutsu don't exist anymore. Some of them were scrapped and others moved to Universal. Check the Universal list to be sure the ones you have still exist. If they do, just move them to your universal genjutsu section. if not, the usual replacement rules apply.


    Ah, didn't know that fuuinjutsu was a subcategory of universal. I've corrected it now . I'm also choosing not to choose my first element yet. Knowing my disregard for elements, I'll probably give it up for whatever talent idea I get in the future .

    Aw. Okay, I won't do my own thing and make my profile the same as everyone's . Bye bye random demon info section.

    Bah! Forgot to take out the stuff that no longer existed . Deleting it and hopefully I didn't miss anything else of the sort.

    Anddddddd... Here's the new profile. Hope I've got everything.

    Sora Hikari
    Blue Bird XXXXX Run Around

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    Character Name: Sora Hikari
    Nicknames: Sora
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female
    Hair Color: Blonde (like lemon pudding *^^* !)
    Natural Eye Color: Blue
    Height: 4' 11"
    Body Type: Fast
    Distinguishing Features: A small seal between her shoulder blades, normally hidden by clothes.

    Background
    A mediocre ninja coming from a family of civilians, Sora has nothing special about her. Both her mother and father make a living by running a simple shop and Sora is the first of her entire clan to become a ninja. Extremely dedicated to her village, just as her parents are, Sora will do anything that needs to be done to protect Kumogakure.


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    Village: Kumogakure
    Organization: n/a
    Rank: Genin
    Titles: n/a
    Headband Style/Color: silver dog tag with black inscription on a chain necklace
    Headband Location: neck

    Chakra Color: warm, happy orange
    Chakra Level: Medium (+3 chakra points/10 max chakra points)
    Chakra Point: 31
    Chakra Elements:
    Universal |
    Extra Chakra Element:
    Raiton
    Chakra Control: n/a

    Tactical: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently.
    [+1 Reaction Speed]

    Long Range: These ninja train extensively in long range jutsu, learning to strike with the most power possible, at the longest range possible.
    [+1 Rank to jutsu with a base range over 15 Feet, +10 Feet to ranged jutsu]

    Weak Bodied: This shiniobi's body has grown weaker than other shinobi of their rank. While they may be as strong as the average shinobi they take an extra rank's worth of damage from ninjutsu and taijutsu.
    [+1 rank damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu]

    Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
    [Only two elements]

    Demon: Rokubi
    Demon Stage: Untamed
    Seal Location: The seal between the shoulders.

    Lightning: The Raijuu is known for it's incredible powers over lightning and transfers this to it's host by granting the bonuses of the Elemental type for lightning.
    [+1 Rank to Raiton, +2 Ranks near Raiton advantage, -1 Rank to all other techniques]

    Speed: With lightning literally being the Raijuu's life blood, it has taken on many characteristics of it, particularly the speed. The Raijuu's presence in the host's body shares this quality, flooding the body with trace amounts of lightning, which enhance the host's nervous system, and thus give base bonuses to reaction time and following, speed.
    [+1 Rank Speed, +1 Reaction Time]

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant: n/a
    Transplant Stage: n/a


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    Shinobi Profession: Sealing Master- Sealing masters are known for their abilities in trapping and controlling. With their special jutsus, they can easily enable themselves to stop attacks and reflect them backwards. 
    Profession Base Benefit:
    Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own.
    (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)

    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    Carver: Some sealing specialists, looking for new ways to utilize seals, take up engraving as an addition to their sealing style. By learning how to engrave seals, the specialist is able to carve seals into almost anything, from a kunai to a simple stick. This art holds the advantage of requiring no ink to utilize, and holds up much better on things such as weapons than normal ink seals.
    (Able to utilize carving. Carved seals will cease to work if the carvings are blocked, such as by a seal carved into steel being battered flat.)

    Chuunin
    n/a

    Jounin
    n/a


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    {Paste approved talent here, with link to approval.}

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    Ninjutsu

    Universal

    Starting Element: Fuuinjutsu (Sealing)
    E Rank
  • Storage Seal Basic



  • D Rank
  • Name of Seal: Hiku (To pull)
  • Name of Seal: Kyouka (Reinforce)










  • First Element: Raiton
    E Rank
  • Yurayura Ranpu no Jutsu (Flickering Light Technique)
  • Seiteki Suji no Jutsu (Static Strings Technique)
  • Teikou no Kuntou (Electricity Resistance Training)
    Note: This skill is passive.
    D Rank
  • Heki no Jutsu (Burst Technique)
  • Kumo Keba no Jutsu (Cloud Wisp Technique)
  • Nagare Isou no Jutsu (Current Transfer Skill)
  • Raiton: Raikou Boruto no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Bolt Technique)
  • Raikou Henge no Jutsu (Lightning Transformation Technique)
  • Raiton: Raikou Jishaku no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Magnet
  • Raiton: Seiteki Chikara no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Static Force)
  • Raiton: Denshi no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Electron Technique)
    C Rank




  • Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank
  • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
  • Bunshin No Jutsu (Clone Technique)
  • Suiganmourou no Jutsu (Drunken Sight Technique)
    Catalyst: Must hear name of jutsu and see user
  • Kumo Monokage no Jutsu (Cloud Cover Technique)
  • Hekireki Koe no Jutsu (Thunder Voice Technique)
  • Raimei Wana Fuu (Thunder Trap Seal)
  • Hibanahouden no Jutsu (Discharge Technique)
    Catalyst: Triggered by touching the target
    D Rank
  • Genjutsu Kai (Release)
    Catalyst: Must recognize that they are in a genjutsu.

  • Magen: Kokuni Arazu No Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique)



  • C Rank
  • Meisai no Jutsu (Camouflage Technique)











  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Demon Jutsu

    Rokubi
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities: (Passive abilities gained by training in the style. Copy/Paste the description. Link to learning the ability.)

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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed: 9

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated: 36

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [2]
  • Store Helper [Start] [End]
  • Mail Delivery [Start] [End]

    D-rank - [12]
  • Tree-planting [Start] [End]
  • Visiting Konoha [Start] [End]
  • Work Around the Hotsprings[Start] [End]
  • Catch the Cat [Start] [End]


    C-rank - [12]
  • Bug-Catching [Start] [End]
  • Tea Fields [Start] [End]

    B-rank - [10]
  • Assist Sunagakure [Start] [End]


  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]




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    Backpack Type/Color: tan backpack
    Tool Pouch Location: behind left side of the waist
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: outside right thigh

    Flak-Jacket: A simple, short-sleeved jacket with a hood and dark blue in color. Sora wears her jacket over a long-sleeved shirt. The jacket is a pull-on with a large pocket in the middle, one kunai holster on the outside of each sleeve, and a hidden senbon holster on the inside of each sleeve. The middle pocket is located in the front of the jacket, on the bottom, and has two openings for Sora to put her hands through. The pocket contains three extra kunai holsters (the kunai in here usually have an explosive note tied to them before-hand) and two extra holsters for exploding smoke grenades (each holster has enough space for one exploding smoke grenade), hidden from sight and within easy reach of Sora's fingers whenever she puts her hands in. The kunai holster on each sleeve holds one kunai and opens downwards. The senbon holster hidden on the inside of each sleeve hold five senbons each and are thin enough to not be noticed from the outside.

    Gold: 3200


    Equipment

    Kunai: 22
    Makibishi: 15
    Shuriken: 31
    Senbon: 40
    Exploding Smoke Grenade: 9
    Flash Bomb: 9
    Exploding Tag: 12
    Steel Wire: 10 meters
    Miscellaneous: Fingerless gloves with plates of armor on the back on each hand.


    Supplies

    Item:

    Custom Equipment

    {Paste customs here.}

    Seals

    Seal [Information]: Location

    Nin Shiki Kaado (Secret Information Cards)

    Aburame, Nagisa: Aburame, Genjutsu, Jounin, Kumo nin, Raiton
    Reiki, Aoi: Nibi, Medical, Genin, Missing nin, Former Kumo nin, Hiton, Katon
    Tsukai, Haruka: Body Sacrifice Sensor, Medical, Genin, MIA, Kumo nin, Hiton, Raiton
    Uchiha, Kensei: Uchiha, Taijutsu, Chuunin, Kumo nin, Katon, Raiton
    Uchiha, Sosay: Uchiha, Ninjutsu, Kage, MIA, Kumo nin, Katon
    Makarov, Laxus: Jiton, Ninjutsu, Genin, Kumo nin, Raiton, Doton
    Shikaku: ???


    Housing/Furniture

    {House Type}: (Link to thread.)
    {Object in above house.}: #
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