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 Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:27 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Calligraphy Pen Haunt - Ghost Looking For: Questions, concerns, or general crits. o u o (Since little things have been shifting in the shop, I want to make sure I haven't missed/overlooked anything that might of needed changing to keep up with the shop-canon specifics.) Quest Link: Kallos Kalamos
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:45 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Demon (Succubus) Looking For: Crit on everything, I guess. I want to make sure she fits the shop and is fleshed out enough to start growing. c: Quest Link: Right here~
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2011 6:05 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Ghost ;; Nature Elemental Looking For: General crit, though I do want to know how the species has fleshed out! Quest Link: x
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2011 1:38 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Pixie - Demon Looking For: Crit on everything, maybe a bit of help on FEAR/Natural ability. (I have a fear it may come off wrong D; ) Quest Link: Adelphie
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Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:18 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Devil's Dandy Dogs - Demon Looking For: General crit, looking to work out any kinks in his natural ability as well as his concept; I've been working on him for a while, and would like to make sure he's solid. Quest Link: Cervantes. ((OTL edited it to reflect his ACTUAL race; wow, I spaced on that one -_- wink )
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 4:24 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Nogitsune - Demon Looking For: I need some crit on everything, and maybe some ideas to help flesh out the character Quest Link: Hotaru
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 10:54 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Monster Looking For: Crits on everything! Quest Link: Howie
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 4:23 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Haunt - Ghost Looking For: Absolutely everything would be perfect, thank you! Quest Link: Mr. Gadsby
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 8:17 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Cockatrice | Monster Looking For: Crit on everything would be lovely. Quest Link: Emil Aventine
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 9:00 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Ghost, subtype Kuchisake-onna Looking For: Predominantly FEAR help, but if you see anything else you'd like to critique, feel free! <3 Quest Link: Serafina Arai
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Codebreaking Conversationalist
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 10:05 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Lotus Eater - Ghost Looking For: Some crit, before I ask for a marking! Please. I'd really appreciate it, I want to make sure Amarus is polished! Quest Link: Amarus the Lotus Eater
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 11:34 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Grim Reaper - Reaper Looking For: General crit is great, and some help with specifics for her FEAR (marked in profile) Quest Link: Here
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 10:19 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Mantodea - Monster Looking For: Everything Quest Link: Yǐn Cáng
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Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:06 am
Crit Please!Character's Race: Zombie - Undead Looking For: General crit would be great! Quest Link: Hanratty
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Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2011 11:59 am
Crit Please!Character's Race: Demon - Gancanagh (Faerie) Looking For: Anything and everything that will help flesh him out a little more, if needed! Quest Link: Marosa
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