[Q] Emil Aventine | Cockatrice | Ready! | Crit please

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Let us all be friends.
Please.
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I want critiques. QAQ

 

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AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Emil Aventine.
Nicknames: None at the moment.
Gender: Male.
Age: 17.

Faction: Monster.
Race: Cockatrice.

Natural Ability:
Petrification – Similar to a Chupacabra’s ability to paralyze, a cockatrice can petrify. The only difference is that a cockatrice doesn't need to stare at their petrified prey to have them remain paralyzed.

Thankfully, Emil is still a very young cockatrice, so the petrification only lasts for approximately five minutes (maybe less).

Personality:
• Socially awkward
XXXXXo Living most of his life in the confinement of his home, Emil doesn’t interact much with the outside world or other halloweeners for that matter. He could list the few people he has ever talked to in his life from the top of his head, and having been living in such a controlled environment had made the poor boy extremely awkward when thrust into the world outside. He believes that the world inside his home and the one outside has two completely separate rules, and had completely forgotten that being himself is more than enough. If you throw him with a crowd of strangers at this current moment, he is likely to just sit in his little corner while watching what everyone is doing, failing many a times to join in any of the groups conversations because he fears being impolite and so forth.

•Quiet
XXXXXo Emil isn’t a very talkative individual. He prefers to be a listener and a watcher while in the company of others, and has a fear of saying the wrong things. The latter mainly caused by how awkward he is with the society, but he’ll get over it. He is more likely to express an idea or keep a conversation going if he is comfortable with the person he is conversing with.

•Caring & Mellow
XXXXXo Worrying about others and looking after them is part of Emil’s lifestyle. He is kind, sweet and has the patience of a saint when handling others. There are moments when he will worry if he’s being annoying, but the notion quickly disappears as he goes into “mommy” mode. This mommy mode includes him fussing over people, and pretty much just being your stereotypical mother hen. After mommy mode, he is likely to apologize for being a little too blunt, too in-your-face, or just worried that he said things he shouldn’t.

•Protective
XXXXXo While this is a trait you don’t see very often, it is part of what makes Emil, Emil. The cockatrice might be a bit awkward and relatively quiet, but that doesn’t mean he wouldn’t stand up for the things and people he wants to protect. He will fight for those important to him even if he has to hurt another to do it. HE WILL B1TCHSLAP THEM WITH HIS HAIR.

Together they make…MOMMY EMIL!

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?
Reason number one: Emil was enrolled because he believes that entering an actual school would be good life experience and had convinced his parents as such (his mother more than approves of this). The second and last reason is a personal reason...it's because he has a complex over Xiu.

FEAR Ability:
Poison Breathe | The Tainted Fang | Emil breaths out a poisonous gas that poisons his enemies.

Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Glowing, amber serpent eyes.
Hair Colour/Style: Long, straight, dark near-black teal colored hair that covers his face like curtains. It ends at around his elbows.
Skin Colour: Think normal human skin, and then think pale, and slightly ashen thanks to not being in sunlight enough.
Clothing Style/Colours: His normal outfit looks more like a uniform with a color theme of black and green. The lacing and details are in green, and the rest being black, there is a cockatrice emblem on the right front pocket on his uniform. The rest of his uniform doesn’t have much detail aside from being a pair of black pants and a pair of black boots.
Extra: there are traces of yellow-green scales around his eyes along with faint traces of white feathers protruding under the scales. He also has a pair of wings similar to those of a dragon on his back and a tail. Both of them are yellow-green in color as well. All of his teeth are pointy and a little sharp, they hurt if he bits down but they wouldn't draw blood unless he uses force.
References: [o]  

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[| Extra |]

| Physical |
● Emil's 5'10 - 5'11.
● His tongue is a forked tongue! Like a snake!
● Emil slurs some of his words when he's stressed or tired (like for Mother, he'll pronounce it as "Mozher").
● Normally, Emil wouldn't consume anything unless it is cooked. However, his animal side doesn't care about what it eats as long as it's edible. This proves to be a problem for Emil because every time he wakes up from his animal side, he ends up throwing up beside his bed or in the toilet (if he's lucky).

| Likes |
● Food - Emil has a sweet tooth, and loves cake especially.
● Books - Emil's favorite pastime aside from listening to his parents' story when he was still living with them. They make him feel as if he had stepped into a completely different world.
● Pillows - The bigger the pillow, the better. Emil likes to build up a small fort/nest with as many pillows as he can have. Yes, he sleeps in a nest of pillows.
● Music - Emil prefers listening to classics and musicals.

| Dislikes |
● Cooking - As much as he loves food, Emil is possibly the worse chief in the world. Everything he cooks bursts into flames and the only thing he can make is a sandwich.
● Mirrors - They make him flinch because he feels as if he'll accidentally petrify himself.
● Weasel - Even though Emil is bigger then they are even in his monster form, he is terrified of weasels. He is likely to flee at the sight of one be it his normal or animal self.
● The Crow of a Rooster - Emil wouldn't die from this but the sound will give him headaches, and possibly temporary paralyzed depending on how close and loud the crow was.

| Background Information |
● Emil's parents are...special as their relationship isn't exactly normal. If you're wondering why, just being told that the father is a Nightmare while the mother is a Cockatrice explains it.
● [with Permission from Kaiyumi] Emil and Xiu are childhood friends. Their parents were (and still are) friends and that was how they met. They used to play together (well, more like Emil following Xiu wherever she went with her uncle secretly following behind), and for the longest time, Xiu thought Emil was mute because of how quiet he was. On the day when Emil finally spoke to her (it was on her birthday), she was shocked and a lot of embarrassments ensured. Both parties' parents (excluding Emil's mother) worry for their children's future and they, probably, still do.  

[Getsurae]

does anything set off his other personality? What are some of his likes, dislikes, hobbies? Maybe add some quirks, habits?

 

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Currently he only knows that when he gets thrown into life threatening situations, the other side comes out. However, over time he'll figure out the other triggers. Anger is one of them, and so is his sense of protectiveness over friends he will probably have if he becomes real. He doesn't know about these triggers yet because he has yet to face these emotions. So, I'm not too sure about putting these in there...Maybe then could be random facts.

Thank you for the question.
More ideas to add in! >u<  

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Note to self: Draw Emil, I haven't done this in a while  

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Rewrote Emil's personality. OnO