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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 1:55 pm
@Tenchi:
-Yes, that is right. I converted yours. Here they are how they would be in pounds and inches.
Weight : 119lbs [53.98 kg] Height : 5'4 [162.56 cm]
- Also, please delete all of the sentences not containing information, put in <>, this was told in the beginning.
- Should be # Custom Weapons Allowed: 1 instead of 1 Custom Weapons Allowed:
- Also, why did you change your Tools numbers? [Should be Kunai: 7 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 0 Makibishi: 0 Smoke Bomb: 3 Flash Bombs: 0 ]
- Genin, not Gennin [Just grammar]
Sorry Cobra for posting it, just wanted to ease your job.
NOTICE: Don't take this as Cobra's final decision, it's my own version.
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 3:53 pm
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|_________RPC Description & History________________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|  Name: Atsureki Hyuuga Nickname(s): Age: 15 Birthdate: June Gender: Male Sexuality: Straight Relationship Status: Single
Height: 1.7 m (5 ft. 6 in.) Weight: 64.9 kg (143 lbs ) Body Build: Lean | Athletic Eye Color: Pale White Hair Color: Black
Physical Description: Though Atsureki is not particularly large, his muscles are well toned thanks to his near constant training. Though he often wears his Akatsuki robes, he can sometimes be found wearing his favorite black kimono, the sleeves of which are an extra half foot long, hiding his hands from view. Like all Hyuuga, the pupils of his eyes are not visible, blending in with the white color of the rest of his eyes.
Personality: Atsureki has grown callous in his time spent with the Akatsuki, though he still believes that he is doing the right thing by ridding the world of the bijuu which nearly destroyed it. He remains calm in even the most extreme of situations, relying on his own abilities to see himself through.
Behavior: When alone Atsureki spends most of his time training, or reading up on what little information there still is on the bijuu. Around others, Atsureki often seems distant, as if he can’t be bothered to care about what’s going on around him, though in truth he rarely misses anything. In combat, Atsureki is cold and calculating, studying his opponents movements and waiting for the perfect opportunity to strike rather than wasting his energy on pointless attacks.
Nindo: “The world has forgotten about the evil of the bijuu, I intend to make them remember.”
Theme song: ---
Character History: Eyes of the Crimson Dawn
Village: Sunagakure Akatsuki
Rank: Chuunin
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|______Ninja Characteristics & Shinobi Skills__________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Clan/Bloodline: Hyuuga Application Approval Stage: Stage 1
Cursemark: N/A
Ninja Class: Taijutsu
Special Ability: [TRAIN]
→ Atsureki will train all four stats once.
Tweak: N/A
A proud member of Hyuuga clan, Atsureki has practiced Juken since he was a child, and has always shown a natural talent for physical combat. Having learned Juken before any other style, Atsureki learned not to rely on physical strength, but on speed and precision, choosing to strike three vital spots in a matter of seconds rather than just landing one powerful blow just anywhere.
Attributes:
Primary Attribute: Speed
Benefit: Speed Ninja receive a +1 rank bonus to their speed, but can even outperform those above their rank by a fair amount. As a Genin, they would be faster in their movements then even the average Chuunin, requiring somewhat of Sp. Jounin to keep up with or catch up to them. Their speed makes their movements blindingly fast, but it does not increase their reaction speed, and therefore does not increase their ability to evade incoming attacks. Higher level ninja with this attribute have been described as simply disappearing only to re-appear closer without showing any sign of movement in between.
...however, not just movement speed is enhanced, but attack speed and tactile manipulation as well. With such an increase to the movement speed of their arms and hands, the deadliness of their strikes is enhanced, making such attacks difficult to keep up with as their movements seem like only a blur.
Combat Ability: Once per combat, a ninja with this attribute can utilize a 'Burst' technique, which enables them either to increase their speed by an additional rank (Putting a Genin's speed above that of a Sp. Jounin) for one post or perform an additional action for that round, enabling them to string together combo maneuvers. (Normally, most shinobi would only be able to use one jutsu per combat post.)
Secondary Attribute: Agility
Benefit: An Agility Ninja receives a +1 rank to their evasion, and enables them to more easily dodge techniques, effectively making them more reactive and quicker to respond to an attack then even the typical Chuunin. Projectiles thrown by an agility ninja very rarely miss, and therefore must be in some way deflected rather then dodged. Agility ninja also cannot be knocked off their feet and can balance quite naturally on even the thinnest of wires without requiring the use of chakra. Somehow these ninja always seem to land on their feet, just like cats.
Tertiary Attribute: Cunning
→ Relying less on physical strength, Atsureki focuses on keeping just out of his opponents reach until he sees an opening to strike.
Being naturally faster than most, Atsureki acts primarily as reconnaissance for the Akatsuki, using his speed and unique doujutsu to keep an eye on things and quickly report back his findings. In combat, Atsureki uses his speed and agility to his advantage by staying just out of his opponents reach until he finds the perfect opportunity to strike.
Specialties:
Tactical Support: All techniques, Taijutsu/Ninjutsu/Genjutsu/Bloodline etc... require 3 fewer posts to learn. In combat, they are particularly adept at evading incoming attacks (+1 to Evade) and they can easily identify the tactics and abilities being used by their opponents in combat (allowing them to identify tactical maneuvers and the breadth and power of the jutsu an enemy is signing). Teammates under a tactical support specialist's leadership gain +1 rank bonus to Evasion and Speed, and can combo more effectively, allowing their allies perform two jutsu per post... so long as they have had the plan laid out to them directly.
Sensor: Sensor ninja have an innate bonus to detect those around them at all times. They are the only ninja who can intuit another shinobi's position or movement purely by detecting their chakra. In all situations regarding [Stealth], Sensor ninja act as if they were one rank higher then their actual rank and the ranges of detection are doubled. Sensor ninja can also innately detect any non-stealthed shinobi within 100 ft of them. Once detected, a Sensor can spend a post to [Focus] on a target. This reveals their relative chakra levels/rank, chakra color, and allows the target to be [Marked]. A marked target can be detected/tracked automatically by a Sensor anywhere within a mile. (A sensor can only Mark up to three Shinobi at a time.)
In combat, all Sensors gain +1 rank in evasion against Ninjutsu and can detect if someone is under the effects of a Genjutsu. These are an innate bonus which comes in sensing the opponent's chakra movements, which gives them an inherent advantage in dodging incoming attacks or detecting a Genjutsu's effects.
Cursemark: N/A
# Chakra Elements: 1
Primary --> Fuuton
Chakra Color: Emerald Green
Total Chakra: 40 Total Stamina: 40
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|_______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|______Squad Information & Mission Logs____________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Squad Name/number: Sensei: Konaga Sai Team Mate:
Completed Missions Log:
Total Mission Points (MP) acquired: 0 MP
E-rank Missions: 0 D-rank Missions: 0 C-rank Missions: 0 B-rank Missions: 0 A-rank Missions: 0 S-rank Missions: 0
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|_______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|._______________Jutsu Information________________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Non-Elemental Rank E - (Basic)
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank D - (Genin)
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Rank C - (Chuunin)
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Rank B - (Special Jounin)
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Rank A - (Jounin)
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Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)
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Fuuton (Wind) Rank E - (Basic)
• Kaze Bunshin no Jutsu (Wind Clone) learned
Rank D - (Genin)
• Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind) learned • Kamaitachi no Jutsu (Slashing Wind Skill) learned
Rank C - (Chuunin)
• Tatsumaki Senpuukyaku (Hurricane Kick) learned • Kaze Shunshin no Jutsu (Wind Instantaneous Body Technique) learned
Rank B - (Special Jounin)
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Rank A - (Jounin)
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Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)
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Bloodline Abilities
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._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|__________Taijutsu: Styles & Techniques____________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Taijutsu Styles Allowed: 3
Primary Style: Juken (Gentle Fist) → Stage 6 :
Juuken is fighting style utilized by Hyuga clan members, it is the strongest style of Konoha. The Byakugan has a penetrating ability to see the tenketsu, the internal chakra coils system 361 pressure points. The clan member can use their fingers or palms to emit chakra to flow into their opponents body's at these precise points. When the hand draws close enough to strke, the clan member can stop or increase their opponents chakra flow. The internal chakra coils which spread throughout the body also wrap around the internal chakra producing organs. So if the internal coils are attacked, it also damages these internal organs. Because a ninja can not train their internal body, such damage can be a critical hit for even a highly skilled ninja.
Maneuvers: • Sweeping Block - The user has learned the proper manner of blocking by simply redirecting a blow rather than trying to stop it. The practitioner uses this concept to effectively maneuver themselves into a position to strike back at their opponent after successfully sweeping the opponents strike aside. • Pressure Point Strike - Because of the users training in precise striking, practitioners of this style learn to strike at the pressure points of opponents in quick precise movements. Usually this simply causes more pain than anything, but with a well placed strike the user can render whole limbs useless. (any limbs that are are struck correctly cannot be used for two posts due to the sheer pain it causes) • Tenketsu Strikes - The practitioner has learned to strike at their opponents internal chakra coil, and in so doing they can cut off or increase the flow of the chakra point struck. In addition because of the close relation between the Tenketsu and chakra producing organs, if the Tenketsu are struck it will also cause damage to internal organs. • Burst of Chakra- Utilizing their formidable chakra control the practitioners of Jūken can increase their speed and power for short periods of time. This maneuver which utilizes the same amount of chakra as a Chuunin level technique doubles the speed and power of the user for just one post, allowing them to close the distance between their enemy and strike. This technique takes almost no time to perform as it simply sends a surge of chakra throughout the users body in such a way that it strengthens muscles. (C rank chakra consumption, 3 post cooldown)
Techniques: • Eight Trigrams Empty Palm (learned) • Hakke Rokujūyon Shō(Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms) • Hakkeshō Kaiten(Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin) • Hakke Hyaku Nijūhachi Shō(Eight Trigrams One Hundred Twenty-Eight Palms) ____________________________________
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Primary Style: Not yet acquired → Current level of Mastery: N/A
# Custom Weapons Allowed: 1
Custom Weapon 1: N/A
Weapon Type: N/A Weapon Range: N/A Weapon Location: N/A
Weapon Description: N/A
Special Properties: N/A
Associated Kenjutsu/Taijutsu Style: N/A
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|_______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|____________Apparel & Ninja Tools_________________/ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Headband Location | Style | Color: Right Bicep | Standard | Black | Outfit | Style: Kimono with extra long sleeves | Outfit | Color: Black | Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh | Black | Projectile Holster Location | Color: Left Thigh | Black | Scroll Holster Location | Color: Waist | Black
Kunai: 7 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 0 Makibishi: 0 Smoke Bomb: 3 Flash Bombs: 0
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[imgleft]http://i746.photobucket.com/albums/xx105/lancestrife/Atsureki2-1.jpg[/imgleft][align=right][color=darkgreen][u][size=23]A[/size][size=18]tsureki[/size] [size=23]H[/size][size=18]yuuga[/u][/color][/size] [color=darkred][size=15]Eyes of the Crimson Dawn[/size][/color] [color=green]Taijutsu |[/color][color=darkred]| [i]Hyuuga[/i] |[/color][color=green]| Gentle Fist |[/color][color=darkred]|[i] Akatsuki[/i] |[/color][color=green]| Chuunin[/color]
[color=green][i]Chakra: 40[/i]|[/color][color=darkred]| Stamina: 40|[/color][color=green]|[i] Status: Healthy[/i] |[/color][color=darkred]| Byakugan: Inactive[/color][/align]
[i][color=darkgreen]"The world has forgotten the evil of the Bijuu...[/i][/color]
[color=Darkgreen][size=17]A[/size][/color][color=black]tsureki Hyuuga[/color]
[align=right][color=darkgreen][i]... I intend to help them remember."[/color][/align][/i]
 Atsureki Hyuuga Eyes of the Crimson Dawn Taijutsu || Hyuuga || Gentle Fist || Akatsuki || Chuunin
Chakra: 40|| Stamina: 40|| Status: Healthy || Byakugan: Inactive
"The world has forgotten the evil of the Bijuu...
Atsureki Hyuuga
... I intend to help them remember."
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:58 pm
Sorry about that cobra. I was skimming those rules a bit, I just noticed second rpc and wrote this up real fast. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:11 pm
The Criticizer @Tenchi:
-Yes, that is right. I converted yours. Here they are how they would be in pounds and inches.
Weight : 119lbs [53.98 kg] Height : 5'4 [162.56 cm]
- Also, please delete all of the sentences not containing information, put in <>, this was told in the beginning.
- Should be # Custom Weapons Allowed: 1 instead of 1 Custom Weapons Allowed:
- Also, why did you change your Tools numbers? [Should be Kunai: 7 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 0 Makibishi: 0 Smoke Bomb: 3 Flash Bombs: 0 ]
- Genin, not Gennin [Just grammar]
Sorry Cobra for posting it, just wanted to ease your job.
NOTICE: Don't take this as Cobra's final decision, it's my own version. Changed the equipment numbers because of Takashi's style: He would rarely use ranged weapons unless there was a strategy behind it. As for the <>'s, it's more for personal use than anything else so I wouldn't forget. Edited everything.
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:23 pm
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|_________RPC Description & History________________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|
 Name: Kiyoko Mayu Nickname(s): Age: 16 Birthdate: May 10 Gender: Female Sexuality: Straight Relationship Status: Single Ethnicity: Caucasian
Height: 1.7 m (5 ft. 6 in.) Weight: 60.3 kg (133 lbs) Body Build: Skinny, but kind of Lean Eye Color: Green Hair Color: Black
Physical Description: Kind of Skinny, Curvy, Pale and with medium length Black Hair.
Personality: Kind of mysterious, Kiyoko is a very....closed person. She prefers to keep you guessing at what she's going to do.
Behavior: Kiyoko behaves the same way all the time. she is mysterious and a bit tricky. She is secretive, and likes to make people think.
Nindo: "When my silence tells you nothing, my actions will tell you everything
Theme song: numb
Character History: The Wordless Assassin
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
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Clan/Bloodline: Mayu (provide link) Stage: N/A
Ninja Class: Assassin
Special Ability: [Stealth]
When using [Stealth] one can wrap their body in a cloak of chakra allowing them to become "invisible" with no limit to how the invisibility can last. They can also mask their footsteps so that only those with sensitive hearing or senses could detect them.
Special Ability: [Craft Poisons]
Users of the craft poisons ability are able create custom poisons unique to themselves, while also being immune to the poisons they create. A poison created by them can be used by Only them.
Tweak: N/A
My ninja class fits with Kiyoko because well she is part of the Mayu clan. A clan that would be wonderful to work with in having an assassins class. It fits with her history, because as a little girl, watching her parents and best friend get murdered she swore to be a better shinobi than her father, and to maybe one day get revenge as an assassin, or at the very least, to revenge her father, mother, and best friend through being the best.
Attributes:
Primary Attribute: Intelligence
Benefit: -3 for learning techniques
Combat Ability: Able to spend a post analyzing an opponent so their next attack is less likely to hit, or be a surprise.
Secondary Attribute: Cunning
Benefit: Not as attracted to "sexy" attribute users, and +1/2 rank to all Genjutsu
Tertiary Attribute: Sexy & Strong Willed
→ I chose these two because that way Kiyoko is at least slightly attractive, and wouldn't be seen as easily to give up compared to others without strong will listed.
Kiyoko is an assassin as well as part of the Mayu clan. I found that the attributes I gave her work well with those two, as well as with her personality. She is very cunning and flirty. She likes to trick people and keep them guessing and on their feet, but she is also insanely smart and tactical.
Specialties:
Tactical Support: -3 for learning abilities, +1 for evading attacks, teammates under a tactical leader gain +1 bonus in evade and speed
Sensor: Can detect ninja 100ft away from them , they can sense another person's position merely by their chakra.
Cursemark: N/A
Chakra Element(s): 1
Primary --> Doton
Chakra Color: Blackish-red
Total Chakra: 25 Total Stamina: 25
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Squad Name/number: Sensei: Team Mate: Team Mate:
Completed Missions Log:
Total Mission Points (MP) acquired:
E-rank Missions: 0 D-rank Missions: 0 C-rank Missions: 0 B-rank Missions: 0 A-rank Missions: 0 S-rank Missions: 0
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Non-Elemental
Rank E - (Basic)
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) • •
Rank D - (Genin)
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Rank C - (Chuunin)
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Rank B - (Special Jounin)
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Rank A - (Jounin)
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Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)
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Doton (Earth Release)
Rank E - (Basic)
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Rank D - (Genin)
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Rank C - (Chuunin)
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Rank B - (Special Jounin)
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Rank A - (Jounin)
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Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)
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Genjutsu
Rank E - (Basic) • Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) •
Rank D - (Genin)
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Rank C - (Chuunin)
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Rank B - (Special Jounin)
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Rank A - (Jounin)
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Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)
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Bloodline Abilities
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Taijutsu Styles Allowed: 1
Primary Style: Not yet Attained → Current level of Mastery: n?A
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Kenjutsu Styles Allowed: 1
Primary Style: Not yet attained → Current level of Mastery: n/A
# Custom Weapons Allowed: 1
Custom Weapon 1: N/A
Weapon Type: N/A Weapon Range: N/A Weapon Location: N/A
Weapon Description: N/A
Special Properties: N/A
Associated Kenjutsu/Taijutsu Style: N/A
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Headband Location | Style | Color: around the neck and blue | Outfit | Style: | Outfit | Color: dark blue | Kunai Holster Location | Color: right thigh | Projectile Holster Location | Color: left thigh | Scroll Holster Location | Color: back
Kunai: 7 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 0 Makibishi: 0 Smoke Bomb: 3 Flash Bombs: 0
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:28 pm
@Jade: Saiyuri
- I have personally edited your entire profile. It involved a few changes to the format that I wanted to implement. there is however one problem...
- You need to choose ONE tweak. You cannot have two tweaks. You have to choose to drop EITHER Genjutsu or Taijutsu, and then you get 3 extra jutsu per rank of the potential skills given up.
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:38 pm
@Tv: Mikado
- I have personally edited your entire profile. It involved a few changes to the format that I wanted to implement.
- When your Bloodline is approved, please link it in the appropriate section (Both the Bloodline and the approval) and send me a PM, I will then Approve your profile
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:43 pm
Uh thanks Cobra...?
I changed that right now, meant to do it earlier but...life...happened e.e'
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:45 pm
Thank you very much Cobra.
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:45 pm
@Sasori: Ken
- I have personally edited your entire profile. It involved a few changes to the format that I wanted to implement.
YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:48 pm
iJwlz-kun Uh thanks Cobra...?
I changed that right now, meant to do it earlier but...life...happened e.e' Then...
YOU ARE APPROVED!
...so long as you understand the tweak (as I sent you in a PM)
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:52 pm
@Tv:
You cannot have 2 RPCs... not until your first character has reached Chuunin at least.
Please remove your 2nd RPC profile submission and save it for later. (In your sandbox would be a good place to keep it)
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:52 pm
Cobra_X @Sasori: Mikado - I have personally edited your entire profile. It involved a few changes to the format that I wanted to implement.
YOU ARE APPROVED! I'm confused, is that Raijin Sasori: Ken?
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:59 pm
@Tenchi: Takashi
- I have personally edited your entire profile. It involved a few changes to the format that I wanted to implement.
- When your Bloodline is approved, please link it in the appropriate section (Both the Bloodline and the approval) and send me a PM, I will then Approve your profile
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