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 Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 2:11 pm
Ya, shouldd have made that mor clear huh..
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:37 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 5:05 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:33 pm
havikthecold  Stone Wall Description The user of this style will have a higher pain toerance than anyother ninja he will come across. Blows that would normaly render body parts useless will have little effect on someone well trained in this style of combat. They will also be very strong. However the useres will be slow and won't be able to dodge taijutsu attacks very easily. History This style was made by a young ninja by the name of Havik. He controled the seven tailed beast and was in constant worry of loseing control of himself in battle due to pain or being knockd out. So he trained himself to take pain better than anyone else ever could he used his chakra to stregthin his muscles so that they could with stand even the greatest of taijutsu styles, and even Jutsu that were ment to hit the opponent whith a blunt force.As he trained in the himself he thought of knew ways to mold his chakra in his body so that he could with stand almost anything, and he could deliver blows that could cripple a moutain. Rules -Must have durability as a trait -Must have a reason to want this style -Must be trained by Haik himself or someone who was givin a scroll or learned the style -The ninja who use this fighting style canot have speed or agility as a strenth, wich means the user of this style are slow and not able to doge easily [unless of course they have a Bijuu, Cure Mark, or Bloodline that give a boost in speed or agility] Training methods The ninja training for this will have to take beating after beating. They will have to be beat to a pulp and then get up and fight. If their will isn't strong enough then they will not be able to stand after being beaten to a pulp{This is why they will need a reason to learn this style, if the are not motivated to push past normal barriers than they will not be able to learn this style. There will also have to be some kind of healing or recuparation after being beatin to a pulp before you are able to train again.}The ninja will also have to were weights on their arms and legs and throw countless punches and kicks to build strikeing power and endurance. -Genin- The ninja will have to had at least two fights or spars were thet were beaten to a pulp and yet still fought on befor training the following. The ninja can focuse chakra into their stomach to weaken blows to th adomen by one rank. if the blow is delt by a Genin it will be half the attack power a Genin should be able to deliver. User is un able to dodge any taijutsu attack(they can still block and parry ) at this level and must take the blow if they have entered this fighting style. [Note unless the user says they have used something from this fighting style they are not useing the fighting style yet and can try and dodge attacks] Rising Knee rank biggrin Desciption:The user brings his knee upward with enough force to knock the wind out of the target if connected to the lungs. If it connect with other body parts it will do enough damage to leave nasty brused. If the blow lands to the lunges of the opponent and the wind is knocked out of them they will be stunned for the next post and will have a hard time countering attacks Elbow Strike Rank biggrin Description: The User will swing their bent arm bringing their elbow to strike their target. The force behind the blow is the same as the rising knee but do more damage seeing as how the elbow is more concentrated than the knee. -Chuunin- The user will have to go threw four more fights or spars were they were beaten to a pulp but still stood to fight. The User is learning how to focuse their Chakra into their arms to inprove power and defence. If the user blocks with their arms Damage is reduced by half a rank Twisting Fist Rank:C Desciption:The use throws a punch while rotating his fist, this punch in renforced with chakra to improve power. If the blow lands to the lung the target they will lose their breath and for three post they will have trouble breathing. If it is landed to the arm, leg, or chest they will have trouble using those parts of their body. If the blow is landed to the face it can hender the targets ability to focuse for the his or her next post. The throat however is more dangerouse, if the blow lands in the throat of the target it can crush their wind pipes which can cause death, or at the very least it will make it impposible to breath for four post in which time the target will not be able to mold chakra and their reflexas and streghth will be hendered as well, due to lack of oxegen. Rising Fist Rank:C Description:This is a upper cut wich is infused with chakra, if the user land this to the tagets chin they will be sent five feet into the air, they will also be stunned for the next post allowing for a mid air combo Stones Round House Rank:C Description:The user build Chakra into his or her leg, then spins around delivering a powerful kick able to crack bones. [This will not break someone leg or arm unless their are added factors] This is the entire Fighting style as of right now, I would like to be able to add onto the style as my Character develops as a ninja, I vow to not add anything to this style that has not been approved in this thread. I think this is fair seeing as how I want my RPC to develop this style as he grows. Approved, but send in all edits you want approved to me.
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:43 pm
I will their will probley be one or two chuunin moves but untill i become joinin their wont be anything big. But I will XD
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Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:42 pm
I figured it was about time someone made a style for Jūken Jūken (Gentle Fist)
Precise, Quick, Fluid    Jūken, or the Gentle Fist style, is the fighting style utilized by Hyuuga clan members, it is the strongest style of Konoha. The Byakugan has a penetrating ability to see the tenketsu, the internal chakra coils system 361 pressure points. The clan member can use their fingers or palms to emit chakra to flow into their opponents body's at these precise points. When the hand draws close enough to strike, the clan member can stop or increase their opponents chakra flow. The internal chakra coils which spread throughout the body also wrap around the internal chakra producing organs. So if the internal coils are attacked, it also damages these internal organs. Because a ninja can not train their internal body, such damage can be a critical hit for even a highly skilled ninja.
Rules
- Must be a Hyuga clan member with the byakugan
- The Tenketsu cannot be struck without the byakugan being active
- Branch family members are not actually allowed to learn the higher forms of Jūken, they can only be taught up to stage four of the style before they must either "try and develop their own style" (like what Neji did), or they could try and steal the scrolls necessary to learn the higher stages.
- To proceed to the next stage, any abilities from the current stage the practitioner is on must be learned.
General Fighting Style
Jūken utilizes open palm thrusts and precise strike with the middle and forefinger. The basic stance of the style is primary arm outstretched, with the palm facing the opponent, while the secondary arm is cocked to the side with the palm facing to the up; the primary leg is positioned to the front with the foot cocked slightly to the side while the secondary foot is held back with the foot placed perpendicular to the direction you’re facing. Blocks and parries involve sweeping motions with the arms that aim to push the opponents strikes away from the body while opening them up for attack.
Training Methods
At earlier stages the user simply focuses on proper forms, learning to fall into the proper stances and react in the appropriate ways to attacks. Once the basics of the style are mastered the user begins to train diligently in precise chakra control, learning the precise amount of chakra necessary to cut off or increase the chakra flow of struck Tenketsu.
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| Genin |
- Stage One -
The user is instructed in the basic forms of the style, from the basic stance, to the correct way to position ones fingers or palms for precise strikes. The user is drilled constantly in the forms, simply practicing moving from one form to the other in a very stylized and structured manner. At this stage the user is only slightly more capable than the average genin, not able to deliver strikes with the precision of those that have learned the higher stages of the style.
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- Stage Two -
Once the basic forms of the style have been drilled into the student sufficiently the next level of training can begin, fluidity of motion. Up to this point the user has only learned how to move from form to form in a precise rigid manner, but at this stage they are taught to move in a more fluid manner. At this point the student is learning Jūken in much the same way the practitioner of Tai Chi would learn their style, utilizing slow and precise movements in order for their muscles to learn how to move instinctively in combat. In combat the practitioner uses these skills quickly, relying on muscles memory to react to attacks rather than having to think about the action. The user is much more capable by the end of this stage, though they would still have trouble against higher ranking shinobis.
Maneuvers learned:
Sweeping block- The user has learned the proper manner of blocking by simply redirecting a blow rather than trying to stop it. The practitioner uses this concept to effectively maneuver themselves into a position to strike back at their opponent after successfully sweeping the opponents strike aside.
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- Stage Three -
At this stage the user builds upon their previous lessons by moving in the same fluid motions but at a much quicker pace. They generally train against dummies that are marked with small marks that pinpoint the pressure points of the body in order to teach the student the precision necessary to utilize the higher stages of this style. Most teachers will teach their students the hand-seals necessary to activate their byakugan at this stage, though some still follow the tradition of forcing the student to activate it out of desperation. By the end of this stage the user is truly formidable in comparison to others of his rank.
Maneuvers learned:
Pressure Point Strike- because of the users training in precise striking, practitioners of this style learn to strike at the pressure points of opponents in quick precise movements. Usually this simply causes more pain than anything, but with a well placed strike the user can render whole limbs useless. (any limbs that are are struck correctly cannot be used for two posts due to the sheer pain it causes)
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| Chunin |
- Stage Four -
This is the first stage that actually requires the use of the byakugan as it teaches the user to strike at the Tenketsu. The practitioner is taught not only how to strike with speed and precision at the Tenketsu, but they are also taught the precise chakra control necessary to cut off or increase the chakra flow of the chakra point struck. In order to train these skills the practitioner trains either on a live subject (though few masters still do this), or they train on a special training dummy that was developed by the hyuga. The dummy can be infused with a small amount of chakra by either the master or the student, and by doing so the dummy will mimic the Tenketsu, allowing the student to train freely on the dummy for hours at a time without having to strike a real person.
Maneuvers learned:
Tenketsu Strikes- The practitioner has learned to strike at their opponents internal chakra coil, and in so doing they can cut off or increase the flow of the chakra point struck. In addition because of the close relation between the Tenketsu and chakra producing organs, if the Tenketsu are struck it will also cause damage to internal organs.
Abilities:
Eight Trigrams Empty Palm
Rank: D
Description: This jutsu is the basis of the Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin, but has a specific target rather than a general area. To perform it, the user does a palm thrust, shooting a concentrated force of chakra out of his hand, to violently push their opponent away.
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- Stage Five -
Once the user is comfortable with striking the inner chakra coil they can be taught the higher forms of the style. Up to this point practitioners of this style are only taught the basics of the style in order to develop the skills necessary to perform the higher ranking techniques. This stage teaches the user to strike at the tenketsu rapidly in order to cause massive amounts of damage as well as cut off their opponent's chakra completely. This stage of training drastically increases the speed of the user, putting them on par with most shinobi of higher rank in terms of speed.
Abilities:
Hakke Rokujūyon Shō(Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms)
Rank: D
Description: This jutsu closes off sixty-four specific chakra points on an opponent's body with the gentle fist, effectively eliminating their ability to use chakra for quite some time and making it quite difficult for them to move. It begins with the closing of two chakra points, followed by four more, then eight, then sixteen, then thirty-two, and then sixty-four strikes. Each set of strikes is done at an increasing pace.
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- Stage Six -
At this point in the practitioner's training they focus solely on chakra control, learning to release chakra not only from the tips of their fingers and hands, but from all of their chakra points. This level of chakra control also allows the user to increase the power and speed of their strikes by supplying chakra to their limbs in the proper way. At this stage the power of the practitioner’s strikes is significantly increased simply because of the precise application of chakra behind each strike.
Maneuvers learned:
Burst of Chakra- Utilizing their formidable chakra control the practitioners of Jūken can increase their speed and power for short periods of time. This maneuver which utilizes the same amount of chakra as a Chuunin level technique doubles the speed and power of the user for just one post, allowing them to close the distance between their enemy and strike. This technique takes almost no time to perform as it simply sends a surge of chakra throughout the users body in such a way that it strengthens muscles. (C rank chakra consumption, 3 post cooldown)
Abilities:
Hakkeshō Kaiten(Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin)
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu utilizes the chakra control gained through Gentle Fist training to release a huge amount of chakra from the user's chakra points when struck. The released chakra blocks any possible attack. The user then spins themselves rapidly to parry the attack, both creating a shield of chakra around themselves and tossing away any would-be attackers.
Hakke Hyaku Nijūhachi Shō(Eight Trigrams One Hundred Twenty-Eight Palms)
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu is essentially a doubled version of Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms. Like the former, it closes off the opponent's chakra points. Unlike the former, it closes off twice as many (12 cool at twice the speed. Alternatively, it can be used to hit a great number of targets very quickly.
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| Jounin |
- Stage Seven -
By this stage of the training the practitioner is already a force to be reckoned with, they are even dangerous enough to pose a threat to shinobi of higher rank due to their ability to completely cut off the flow of chakra. This stage of the training focuses on combining the principles of defense and offense teaching the student to block and counter even more effectively.
Maneuvers:
Sweeping Counter- Utilizing the basic principles of the sweeping block and the chakra burst, the practitioner can parry an opponents attack and strike multiple times from a seemingly impossible angle. The user successfully blocks and then uses an advanced chakra burst that takes up the same level of chakra as a Jounin level technique, to maneuver so quickly around the opponent that they can strike from behind their opponent. (B rank chakra consumption, 5 post cooldown)
| Jounin |
- Stage Eight -
This stage further applies the principle of building upon what the user has already learned, teaching them to use their amazing chakra control and advanced taijutsu training to perform devastating attacks that can be used both offensively and defensively.
Abilities:
Shugohakke Rokujūyon Shō(Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms")
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu is a combination of the Eight Trigram Palms Heavenly Spin and the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms. In this jutsu, the user emits a constant stream of chakra from their palms, creating extremely sharp chakra blades. With the users amazing flexibility, they can reach any point around themselves, allowing them to hit any target within their field of vision. While using this jutsu, user moves extremely fast, allowing them to hit hundreds of targets with extreme precision, much like the original Sixty-Four Palms jutsu. Additionally, they can control the size of the chakra beams in their palms, allowing them to create larger, arc-shaped chakra beams that spread out across her entire attack range. This creates an "absolute defense" effect similar to that of the Heavenly Spin, though the cutting nature of the chakra prevents any outside force from restricting it. In this way, the technique can be used as both an offensive and defensive maneuver.
Hakke Kuushou - Eight Divination Signs Air Palm
Rank: B
Hakke Kuushou is a ranged Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Neji. Extending chakra from his body, Neji will thrust his palm at his target. This will send out an invisible wave of chakra that can knock his opponent back. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points.
Hakke Hasangeki - Eight Divination Signs Destructive Mountain Fist
Hakke Hasangeki is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Neji. Extending chakra from his body, Neji will thrust his palm into his target. This will send out a wave of chakra that will knock his opponent backwards into nearby rock to cause further damage. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points.
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| Kage/Sannin |
- Stage Nine -
The final stage of the style, at this point the user is no longer truly learning anything new so much as they have reached an understanding of gentle fist that makes them significantly more dangerous. They have come to a point where they can manipulate their chakra in ways they never thought possible, using all that they have learned up to this point to create one of the most effective and deadly styles in the known shinobi world.
Abilities:
Eight Trigrams Ultimate Wind
Rank: A
Description: The user uses Air Palm thrice on his opponent, sending them crashing into a large object or structure, before using it again to collapse the structure on the opponent.
Eight Trigrams Crumbling Mountain Bombardment
Rank: A
Description: The strikes the enemy's vital area while discharging their chakra within the enemy's body until it bursts from the back in the form of a small thin beam that rapidly enlarges into a massive mountain-destroying wave of chakra. This technique seals off tenketsu.
Eight Trigrams Palm Heavenly Spin Absolute
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu is simply a larger, more powerful version of the Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin.
True Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms
Rank: S
Description: A combination of the original Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms, the Sweeping Conter, and the Eight Trigrams Empty Palm technique, the user leaps forward and strikes the enemy several times in the front before dashing behind them. He strikes several more times until using an Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin-like strike to launch the enemy into the air. There the user appears over the opponent and strikes them several more times before hitting them once more with a huge amount of chakra, blasting them into the ground in with a beam of chakra. Assuming the opponent is even able to get back up after this assault, their chakra flow will be completely cut off for five posts.
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Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:34 pm
There is already jutsu available for the clan members.
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Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 7:13 pm
Yes, but the current format does not have descriptions of the attacks, only names and ranks. I'll have a look at this one tomorrow, and see if it will replace the current one.
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:06 am
Defined By Spontaneity There is already jutsu available for the clan members. I know that there is a "jutsu" for it, but juken is supposed to be a taijutsu style, so I just thought I'd make one for it
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 6:24 pm
Chakra Enhanced Strength CombatFocused, Wild, Strong
History: Developed by Medical-nins, this has been an ideal taijutsu designed to combine the knowledge of anatomy as well as chakra control. It first formed in Konohagakure, and quickly spread throughout all of the great known countries. Ninja are known to even fear the sight of another ninja, with these superhuman strengthened abilities. It was formed to make up for the frail bodies and lack of physical ability that most Medical-nins had, making use of agility or cunning instead.
Requirements
-Must be a Medical Ninja
-Chakra control must be primary strength
Natural Style
Ninja that utilize this style will make multiple quick combination strikes, and constantly change the variation so as to make it extremely difficult to find a pattern in the chains of attacks. They tend to take on a street fighting, however with more precise attacks. The chakra combined in the punches or kicks, is so lethal, that they can take on an assassin's capability in defeating an opponent in a short time duration.
Training
If one seeks to train to reach new heights in this, it is recommended to take the time to learn chakra controlling exercises such as water walking and tree climbing. Training involves repeated punches and kicks on thick trees or large boulders, combining chakra in hopes of annihilating those obstacles.Genin Stage (Requires ten posts to learn) At this stage, the practitioner has the most basic understanding of chakra control. They have successfully trained themselves to focus chakra to specific locations around the body, and are naturally more powerful than they normally would be. They will know a few starting abilities, but nothing amazing. They also learn their first two maneuvers.
->Maneuver(s)
Punch Twice Sweep - D-rank. Charging at the opponent, the user will thrust forward and punch two times at the torso and finally sweep under their legs, in an attempt to catch them off balance.
Jump Crash-Down Uppercut - C-rank. Using a wall or from atop a tree or building, the user will jump into the air, performing a front flip, and slamming the heel of their right leg into the head of the opponent, and as the user lands a single rough punch is launched at the opponent's chin.
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Chakra Punch - D-rank. Focusing chakra to a single arm and hand, the user may slam this into the opponent, pushing them back and causing moderate damage.
Chakra Kick - D-rank. Focusing chakra to a single leg, the user may heave it into the opponent, either knocking them down, launching them up, or pushing them far back and causing moderate damage.
Chakra Toss - C-rank. Focusing chakra to the upper torso, the user may wrap their arms around the opponent, and lift them over the shoulder, hurling them behind.
Chuunin Stage (Requires ten posts to learn) At this stage, the Medical ninja practitioner has much more to work with. They have trained and honed their chakra focusing ability, and are now able to combine anatomy with focused attacks. They also gain access to three new maneuvers, as well as more techniques.
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Running Bicycle Kick Hammer-Down - C-rank. Focusing a large amount of chakra to one's legs, they can run forward and jump upwards, and repeatedly kick at the opponent's up torso in a bicycle motion so as to keep the user airborne. The final strike is a heavy double slam down of the fists on the shoulders of the opponent with heavy damage.
Triple Rising Blasphemous Punch - B-rank. The user will strike using a single arm, three times with hard chakra-focused slams, with a final bone-breaking punch, sending the opponent flying.
Twirling Horror Smack-down - B-rank. After getting the opponent into the air in some way, shape, or form, the user will jump upwards and grip their legs. Using chakra-induced strength, they with spin the body of the opponent around three times, before tossing them downwards into the ground. The user will then fly down using both elbows and use their weight to increase the force headed for their ribcage.
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Chakra Earth-break - B-rank. The user may slam into the ground, with the ability to create a massive crater, breaking the area about 50 feet all around, 50 feet deep. This can be used to find people hiding underground. If used directly on an opponent, it is capable of shattering multiple bones and causing heavy fractures.
Chakra Thrash - A-rank. Forcefully gripping the hair of the opponent, the user will yank it down, momentarily blinding them from the user's actions. The user will then knee them repeatedly, before tossing the body on the ground with the hair-gripped hand.Jounin Stage (Requires ten posts to learn)
This is the final point of the Medical training process. The user by now has an inhuman knowledge of the body's anatomy, as well as the ability to release devastating blows of chakra at any point on the body. The user gains one final maneuver, as well as two techniques.
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The Incapacitator - A-rank. The user will focus chakra to all of their limbs. Repeatedly hammering into the opponent left - right - left with their fists, they with then suddenly kick into the groin as hard as they can, lifting the opponent off the ground. From there, the user grips their waist on either side, and slams them skull-first into the ground behind them.
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Chakra Ultra Palm - B-rank. Awaiting the opponent to charge or come within range, the Medical nin with pretend to uppercut, but instead using the base of the palm to heave into the jaw, sending them flying onto their back. If enough moment was caused, this can break the jaw.
Chakra Reverse Toss - A-rank. The moment the opponent tosses a taijutsu attack, at any force or speed, the Medical nin will precisely calculate its moment of collision. Gripping whatever limb attacked first, they will use the moment of the opponent and lob them over the shoulder, for severe damage via their own push.
Taijutsu Master: Aaron Rakatsui
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 3:42 pm
I hate to be a bother, but Can I get a ruling on my style?
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 6:18 pm
It all looks good to me, but the Bust of Chakra and Sweeping Counter look like they should have a cool-off period. Simply because a Kage could pretty much double their stats indefinitely.
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 6:21 pm
Good point, I didn't even think about that I'll edit real quick
edit: alright I edited it, how does it look now?
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 6:26 pm
Abilities:
Eight Trigrams Ultimate Wind
Rank: A
Description: The user uses Air Palm thrice on his opponent, sending them crashing into a plateau of stone, before using it again to collapse the plateau on the opponent.
And for ones like this, you should say, "Collides into a large object or structure" instead of something specific like a plateau. That particular object isn't that common.
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 6:28 pm
ah, true, true, I forgot to edit that one to make more sense
edit: ok, edited
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