emiryj
full scan please!!!!! ^___^
Alright, full scan for your current avi:
Full scan:
Background -> Top -> bottom
So for the background, I can say it fits pretty fine with your overall colouring, shape, skin tone etc. It's not taking away your avi's attention, and it has a faded colour, which circles around the avi, that enables it to look like some sort of frame, for your avi to stand in.
So for your overall colour choice you went for white, which is more visible than the faded colour in the back. This means that you avi will be able to steal all the attention, rather than the background consuming the attention from your avi. So not bad colour choice.
Top: The hairstyle is cool, I think it has a nice shape around your avi's head. It fits well with the background, due to it not being spiky, but rather having some fine shapes.
add-ons: The rose is a nice addition to your hair, it allows more filling, more detail, and synergizes fine with the flower the background includes.
Face: In my opinion seems to be the weakest part on your avi. That is mainly due to me noticing that you have no mouth. Usually no-mouth works on otherworldly creature/avi's but your's should have a mouth, just to get more personality, as the mouth itself really can express a lot on the avi e.g. emotion etc. I'd say you should get some sort of smile, or some sort of lips that shows a small smile. It may fit well with your current overall look. The current eyes looks fine on your face, and so does the blush which also is a nice addition to get more colour around the face.
So underneath your neck you got a ribbon. I'd say it's a nice addition, and the fact that it has a colour tone difference which many people would say made it stand out more, looks good. As making it stand out means that the detail is visible. In this case the detail is the tie, which is easier to notice, as you got a different colour tone on it.
Torso: It's hard to see, not much to say here. But it seems to fit in with the overall colour (top part)
Leggings: I feel this part of your avi could use some tweaks as well, I'm quite sure you are running a leg mod. But I feel like it shows too much leg, but the colourization on the item itself is okay. So i'd suggest you should find something that covers more leg e.g. Knee height
Overall verdict: not bad avi, I feel you got many things in place. But whilst having that said, you also got some spots which could use a tweak, to spice it up. Apart from that I think you managed to stick to the bright colours well, and I like the BG colour with your avi's white.
Suggestions:
I'm weak when it comes to leg mod, so I'd suggest you check out this list, and perhaps you may find an even better fitting leg mod Ey?
Click here for the list
For the mouth, try one of the "
Lucie" mouths, they exist in tons of different colours.
Hope this helped,
-Azu