- growing up i understood everything was going to turn out great but with time and time everything that i understood fell apart i wasnt forgiven in an instant it took dayz to b forgiven and all i knew about love shattered as well. My heart grew stronger with everyday but grew 2x weaker with rejection. the disney world i learned nd loved came shattering below my feet i didnt get wat i wished for never came to be. the true love i had always ended the world i desperately perfected fell apart. everything became hell instead of heaven. And days i wonder......Why Was I Born..Why Was This Life For ME?
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- | Submitted on 07/28/2010 |
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- Title: My cruel world
- Artist: chiquito mexicanito
- Description: ~non~
- Date: 07/28/2010
- Tags: cruel world
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- chiquito mexicanito - 08/04/2010
- yea da intention was to express because that day it was really a hard day and i forgot to reedit it
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- Yureiaa Hearts - 08/04/2010
- I don't mind the rambling feeling in your free-verse, it sets the mood of your work, and that's good. It'd be nice for a little punctuational break between some of it, though, so readers can understand exactly what you're saying without confusion. Unless this was your intended impression?
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