Prisoner

• Artist: dandelion fire
• Description: I just need a break from everything happening.
• Date: 05/30/2010
• Tags: prisoner

So many things
intertwined to make up the
twisted wreckage of my life
Good things, bad things,
unimportant but still effective things
Too many things
Like chains holding me in place
Like ropes pulling me in every direction
Like a barrier of water around my body
preventing me from breathing
I want to break free
Break the chains, Cut the ropes, Drain the water
Start over completely
Clean breaks heal faster
Just get away from all these things
Then gradually put them back together
in the right order
I want to move far away
Slice these ties, then pull back the ones i want
Forget the ones i don't
Fix my life, so it's just as i like
Make it perfect.
But life doesn't work like that

Comments

[dandelion fire]

they're not sentences. they're thoughts.

[Bashand]

"intertwined to make up the
twisted wreckage of my life"

You can't break a sentence in two like that, less it be read incorrectly and be confusing as ********.

[The-Poison-Muffin]

So relative.. Quite moving as well. Very good work.