Weapon

• Artist: rainbowryda
• Description: a simile poem we had to write in English, i think it turned out pretty good :)
• Date: 04/29/2010
• Tags: strongest

I hold my pen like a weapon
the paper is my prey
I attack with the curvings of letters
the page is being assailed
with every strike of my sword

Comments

[Eretico]

A good start for a poem,but it's too short.Exapnd it,and it should turn out to be an even better poem. 3/5