-Allow Me-

• Artist: Imperfect Replica
• Description: Started off with the first two lines being an interesting sounding Facebook Status, and become this short little thing, kinda quick, kinda poor, but oh well, critize if you wish, please.
• Date: 02/28/2010
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Allow me to break this endless cycle
Allow my silence to echo through the ages
Allow me to break this endless cycle
Allow my peace to shine in the darkness
Allow me to break this endless cycle
Allow my thoughts to resonate with the sages
Allow me to break this endless cycle
Allow my acts to carve the future of the world
Allow me to break this endless cycle

Comments

[Imperfect Replica]

I see what you mean when I actually take a look at it...

[Archangel Thaeos]

My eyes are getting confused. Perhaps you should space the lines out a bit more, just for vision's sake, but lyrically, it's rather good.