El Maestro

• Artist: JohnLeprechaun
• Description: It sounds somewhat dirty, but the intentions are pure, I assure you. You can interpret it any way you like. As for the structure, it's like some weird limerick.
• Date: 01/05/2010
• Tags: maestro

Despite the drowning, all-surrounding din
I summon sweet sonatas from your skin
The discord, swarming in your heart
Surrenders to my playful art
I'm drawing out the song from deep within

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I love it 4/5. I think the last line could end more smoothly though. I like how it gets straight to the point but is still very artistic, good balance. =)