Never Forget

• Artist: BloodStainLoveStory
• Description: another recent peice, referencing how i felt at the time
• Date: 12/27/2009
• Tags: never forget love hate death

Until the daylight has broken and the sky has opened
We will never know this true beauty
The only image of beauty i ever held, was your virtual glance
Now it has been stripped from me and i wonder blind
After all these hours sitting, waiting, wondering if you still loved me
Then i get my answer, "Not a chance in the world"
Suddenly my eyes are hit with a feeling i never hath felt
Like two flowing waterfalls my tear fall away
I drew my blade, cut the skin and finally i was free
I still think about you and never is my mind clouded by doubt
I watch in awe of you from above, of love and admiration lost i will never forget
This is a toast to you, you beautiful slayer

Comments

[lovealwaysadri]

Wow. Thats all i have to say. No wait its really really good 5/5 Rate my stuff?

[BloodStainLoveStory]

im gonna be totally honest with everyone, this is definitely not one of my favorites, it was too forced and didnt come naturally. but thank you to all who have taken time to rate and comment.

[TohoshinkiForever]

Eh. That was okay. 4/5 ;P

[Kiokah]

Nice I like it 5/5 xd

[VvryukvV]

2/5 dont use old english improperly it destroys the peom. Describe the blood flowing, the feel of the razor, the leaving of your consiousness, the dulling of senses as you fade off, it lacks the feel and touch of death.

[ICanHazPanda]

Really Intense :] . I love it <3 1494515/5

[BloodStainLoveStory]

@ tigcat2 I actually want to be an author or a journalist