The New

• Artist: Gazma
• Description: Sometimes when I write...it's as if I am taken over by something which writes the poems in my stead. Such is the case for this one. I don't know what to think, but I hope that you will enjoy it all the same.
• Date: 11/26/2009
• Tags: happy world heart pain angel

Dreary rags from former days
Watch them all fade away
The white returns
Your filth is gone
Your heart is filled
With a brand new song
The joy returns
As does the bliss
Your lover's greeting
A soft, gentle kiss
The world's anew
With joy abound
Watch it all
Come full circle round
You've never felt
This way before
There's no telling
What's in store
A brand new excitement
Fills your days
You've been lifted from
Your former daze
Your happiness radiates
To everyone around
Listen for
That gentle sound
A familiar voice
Is calling you
It's that sweet, little angel
That precious jewel
Never let her go again
She endured the heartache
Now, no more pain

Comments

[lil_miz_mistr3sz19]

I know how you feel. That happens to me in my poems to but the poem has meaning in several ways. Great Work smile you should continue writing like this.

[Tobi-s Fangirl13]

That was really good! I know what you mean, sometimes when I'm writing a story or a poem, it just seems like I kind of merge into the story or something, and it just starts flowing. It's weird, but the end results are usually okay. This was a great poem! biggrin It was sort of like a song!

[transiti0n]

Ooo thats great biggrin But when I said it in my head, it kind of went like la-di-da . like up and down up and down. nonetheless, its great.