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The Wide sea
Foaming, throbbing like a heart beat
The Wide Open sea beckons to me
A wailing madwoman am I
Caught in the currents of life that push me
to and fro, to and fro,
Rocking, Cajoling, Crushing, Extricating, Crushing,
Gasping for air,
I try not to drown
In the rush of the tide that is mankind
The wild, free sea, it beckons,
Embraces with open arms, a salient watcher of events
I want to drown in her depths.
- Title: The Wide Sea
- Artist: akchik
- Description: A poem about being tossed in the rat race that is life.
- Date: 10/02/2009
- Tags: seas madwoman life
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Salornix - 12/29/2009
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That's awesome
Comment on mine?
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- amantewords - 10/15/2009
- It seems unfinished I guess you might say. I loved how you put it together and made it feel as in "..wide open sea beckons to me, a wailing madwoman am I, caught in the currents.." I loved it.
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- akchik - 10/09/2009
- ty
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- MiseryZombie - 10/08/2009
- Ah, neat perception.
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