Nobody

• Artist: Nati4
• Description: Just simple :3
• Date: 08/17/2009
• Tags: nobody

Nobody loves you
Nobody cares
Nobody listens
Nobody shares

Nobody loses themselves in your eyes
Nobody calls you in the middle of the night
Nobody sees you as beautiful
Nobody asks you if you're alright

Nobody thinks about you every night
Nobody wants to wake up next to you
Nobody tells you all their secrets
Nobody whispers “I love you”

Nobody holds your hand
Nobody gets to kiss you
Nobody writes you love letters
Nobody misses you

...Can I be your Nobody?

Comments

[-PaTcHeS_oF_Love-]

Seems to me that this took you five minutes. You struggled a little but it just came easily. I suggest keeping the Rhyme Scheme the same beats per line. It makes things flow better. I struggled trying to read this and let it flow together.

[Tuesday Deathday]

Omg I love it!