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end this sadness
end this madness
kill my red hot rage
free me from this earthly cage
you can kill me when you want
this image called heaven is just a taunt
im going to hell
like being locked up without bail
dont shed a tear
ill still be here
in your heart
that special part
its easy to kill
you dont have to feel
just end it all
and watch me fall
if it do it myself it still wont be called suicide
they would consider it homicide
that make you wanna cry?
you wanna know why?
i have had your name so clearly carved in my wrist
from that last fight that i made you pissed
- Title: waiting
- Artist: Kryxxian
- Description: my girl made me depressed after we fought and wanted me to go die so...
- Date: 07/26/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Kryxxian - 11/28/2009
- this poem is confusing but so is the reason i wrote it... my girl and i fought, broke up, she came back saying she still wanted me... even after saying i should go die... yeah... and even now... we're dating again...
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- XdarkAZNshadowX - 10/21/2009
- This is great! But maybe next time, you should make it less confusing. I mean, poems are supposed to be confusing, but yours is really. Especially the last part. Otherwise, 4/5
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