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The roses you gave me
Are withered and black
The heart that I gave you
You gave back
The words we shared
No longer there
The love we had
No longer shared
- by alexsblackrose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/02/2009 |
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- Title: Love Death
- Artist: alexsblackrose
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- Date: 07/02/2009
- Tags: love death
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- alexsblackrose - 07/09/2009
- thank you!!!!
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- hadezs7 - 07/06/2009
- good poem
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- Sunafire - 07/03/2009
- The rhyming was good, till you repeated 'Shared' you could have done 'cared' or 'scared'
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