Poem made when i was bored

• Artist: LacylovesNirvana
• Description: Ok I made this one day when I was sad(also extremly bored)
  I am sure it sucks terribly.
  Oh well enjoy.
  
• Date: 06/20/2009
• Tags: weird depressing raven

Life is a mysterious thing
Hard to give but easy to take
I have no purpose to my making
In my heart i want a stake
That is why a gun's to my head

Life is not simple for me
I guess its because im unique
I hate it all don't you see
Depression makes it hard to think
A raven sits at my window

Why would you do this it said to me
You have a whole life ahead of you
Life's to difficult don't you see
I hate myself it's true
The ravan sat there questionably

I can't take the pain anymore
The raven looked at me again
It stole the gun out of my hand and it was no more
I pulled out a knife the raven in horror
I stabbed my heart its all over

Comments

[Braided_Twist]

Its good, a lot of thought into this one. I gave a 3/5 for one simple reason. A little off the topic, of depression. It went from poem into story. Which is really good. I congratulate you.

[LacylovesNirvana]

Wow Thanks for the good ratings guys ^___^
I didnt know I was good.