Demon Eyes

• Artist: Scarlet Renesmee Stone
• Description:
• Date: 06/09/2009
• Tags: demon eyes

Eyes red and black
Staring at you with it's deadly eyes
Full of anger, full of hate
It's desire for your blood

Bloody eyes piercing through you
Waiting for you to come closer
It's eyes so frighting you become paralyzed
at this sight.

It come's closer and closer
But all you can see are these black, red, bloody Demon eyes.

Comments

[ElectraShocked]

Really good. But when I finished it I wanted more! haha, it's great.
Comment and Rate back??
5/5 from me

[Sub-_-Reign]

I don't usually comment but this was very good and very similar to my work. The only thing is i wanted more, too short. I rarely comment but its more rare that I go to see the rest of someones poetry. I hope you have more, good job, applause*