More Than Smart

• Artist: ohyeahyeah64
• Description: This is a random thing that I wrote a couple years ago, i think it was meant to be a song, but song lyrics are practically poetry so it could be either i guess :) And I think I meant to add to it a bit, but I never got to it. Please don't be overly critical I wrote this a LONG time ago and I don't feel like sitting here reading your cruel and hurtful comments.. lol Well, thanks I hope you like it :)
• Date: 05/06/2009
• Tags: more than smart

I'm not too hot and I'm not too cold,
I'm not too small and I'm not too old.
We were laying together, you put your hands on me,
And I thought that would make you happy.
You begged to see what you shouldn't have seen,
And I gave in eventually.
I always wished I could make it work,
But you'd never been anything but a jerk.
I just wished you'd hold my hand in the dark,
And tell me that i'm more than smart.

Comments

[ohyeahyeah64]

thank you very much smile i really appreciate that! smile

[False Noodle]

Instant favorite to me, you remind me of someone I kind of begrudged long ago in the essence of this poem. Hurts to think about it but I feel that the style and straight forward approach without using any bad grammar or purple(as i call my own writing when i get in Cheshire Cat mode.) converse to convey the point and promote the topic. Very original and very well written. I assume it means something important to you because you wrote it with fire and didn't stop to edit.