Go on with your life

• Artist: Rose Blackburn
• Description: Go on with your life.
• Date: 04/17/2009
• Tags: with your life

Go on with your life
Don't worry about me
Go on with your life
As if you can't see
Go on with your life
As if you're dying
Go on with your life
Without crying
Go on with your life
Don't worry about it.
Go on with your life
Don't dwell in a pit
Go on with your life
As if I didn't die
Go on with your life
Please don't cry.

Forever I died so go on with your life
As if I never was there.
Forever I sinned so go on with your life
As if we were never a pair.
So Go on with your life and show
the world how much you mean to them and me.

Comments

[Cocoskitten]

I think that you repeat "Go on with your life" too much, but then again, that's just in my opinion. After reading about 5 or 6 lines, you kind of lose the reader.
But other than that, it's still a good poem :]