Maddening Need

• Artist: maydaymouse
• Description: The title is just showing what I really needed after what happened, which I won't go to in depth too, so anyways rate it, and comment. I really want to know what you think.
• Date: 03/20/2009
• Tags: happy madness

Tear are your friends,
When you smile abandons you.
Crying can help
To let you be mad.
Madness is your friend
When you don't want to be happy,
Laughter is hard when
You just want to scream.
So when the thing that
Makes you most happy leaves you,
Have some screaming,
Have some crying,
And try being mad.
But... I don't promise,
That it will bring what makes you
Happiest back.....

Comments

[green gir1]

Thats amazing work maisy

[Riaxue]

mn that happens a lot....... i give it 5/5, man that is sad sad

[Riaxue]

very good x]

[Cherry Blossom Writings]

I like the idea that you had in this poem and it was well written however I think it could have been written in a different way so it flowed more easily. None the less a good read. 4/5

_Kayame_

[Pro Amy Shiko1991]

I thought it was very well writen. You did pretty good. Keep up the good work.

[computergirl123]

i though i was pretty good! 5/5