Down the road

• Artist: Zombie Hunter 9
• Description: I walk alone
• Date: 03/18/2009
• Tags: down road

I try to fight it but it brings me to my knee's
Looking at the world I can't believe what I see
So much pain, anger, sadness, and death
I wonder to myself, what else is left
Not knowing when, where, or why
All that's left is to say my good bye's
Draging my sorrow like a heavy load
All alone, walking down this lonely road.....

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

u dont need spell check when u got me.

no apostrophe in knees nor in byes.
Dragging
a ? would be nice to use after, "what else is left" since it is a question in thought.

ohter than that your good ^^

[xnopyt]

nice

[niki_leigh]

i agree w/ racheling. biggrin only trying to help

[Racheling]

You might want to check your apostrophe useage. smile Also spell check.