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They lie
They cry
They try to get on your side
Some are truthful
Some are nice
Some are bugs telling lies
Some talk about you
behind your back
Some are sharp
Just like tacks
Some use you
They don't care
Some you dont' know
So they're not there
But some friends are nice
They really care
But you don't know
Which ones are really there
Looking out for you
Keeping you making sure your there.
- by _RainbowStarBabyCheekz_ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/10/2009 |
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- Title: Friends
- Artist: _RainbowStarBabyCheekz_
- Description: This is my second about true friends and jerks.
- Date: 02/10/2009
- Tags: friends jerks life
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Comments (6 Comments)
- HotShot1489 - 10/22/2009
- comment on mine! this is really good but it could use a lil work
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- Surliat - 05/07/2009
- I like it, but maybe you can try to put in more about true friends and even out all you think of true friends and jerks.
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- Silently_Die_By_You - 02/15/2009
- it needs more description and more meaning!!
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- xXsecret_artistXx - 02/13/2009
- i love the poem! smile
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- E x i t i n g - 02/10/2009
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I think at the end you mean "you're" not "your"
It's sweet, but I think i'd be better if it were more abstract and had a symbol or two - Report As Spam
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