Ending Of A Hopeless Case

• Artist: veeda
• Description: this is the darkest poem i have written. I wrote this when feeling really low one day, lookin back their really was no excuse for writting it. Just thought i should add it as it is part of my collection.
• Date: 02/08/2009
• Tags: ending hopeless case

Feel sorrow, feel pain,
On this world a mighty stain,
Nothing useful, no true hope,
Pull the trigger, hang the rope.

End the suffering of those undeserved,
Wait until not knowing, always observed.
Strike when pained, strike when down,
Venomous sting, from toe to crown.

Help you end, help you quit
Whilst you die, I watch and sit.
Hold the fort, wait to surprise,
Your own ignorance, your demise.

Who would know? No one cares,
All the anguish your past bares.
Who would notice you are departed?
No one concerned, no one downhearted.

Your life over, just a fragment of past,
Your memory forgotten, it never will last,
No flowers at your funeral, no invites to send,
This is your story, like your life … it ENDS.

Comments

[sycoskater]

this poem was totaly awesum. the rhyming was perfict and everythin about it was. keep up the gd work

[ShadowBells19]

Dude! you could totally make that a song! i was singing a rythm and it rocked hardcore.

[ashley22x]

Wow, I really liked the rhyming. Adds to the image. The last line was my favorite. I'd love to read more of your work. :]

[- Kuro Feather -]

it's really good smile keep it up !