You and Me

• Artist: -JustScreamPonyo-
• Description: Jux a short poem P:
• Date: 02/07/2009
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I think of you and all the things that you do.

When people say love is true, all I can do is smile at you.

I love the way you make me laugh and try to put away the sorrow, but I'm only happy for now until tomorrow.

Teenagers never think, only act. Either that is me or a fact. So remember me, for we may not see eachother again. Until we make the right choices in the end.

Comments

[Dream1324]

Awesome and rhythmic

[Kibroth]

Not bad. Has something of a lyrical quality to it. Do remember to preview it before submitting and look it over (tanza 3, line 2, "each other" needs a space).
Otherwise, not bad!

-K

[lois_griffin_92]

LOVE xd

[pretty300]

that was great