Snow

• Artist: mexicantacos2003
• Description: Haiku (I think).
• Date: 01/19/2009
• Tags: snow clouds haiku

White rain comes down soft.
It rests on the gras so green,
like clouds in summer.

Comments

[x - - no utopia]

A haiku is a Japanese poem with 5 syllables on the first verse, 7 on the second, and 5 again on the last verse. There has to be 3 verses altogether. This is a haiku, but it needs some work.

[Bleuraven123]

I have forgotten what a haiku is so I don't really know what to say...
But I think to be a haiku, it needs one more line.. sweatdrop