Lost in a Phantasy

• Artist: Hawkbri
• Description: based on how I used to feel, of how I used to be, and how I now feel. when I'm lost in a book, the Siren of Phantasy chains me to that book, and until I complete it, I cannot let it go, I cannot stop reading.
• Date: 01/10/2009
• Tags: lost phantasy

Raining outside,
and I'm hurting without,
I need someone to confide,
please don't leave me out?

In the library,
I've been reading,
another character's hurting,
and I cry to the contrary.

She's not real,
she cannot feel,
yet I want her to heal,
this book I cannot seal.

outside it's raining,
so I stay here and read,
I grab a snack to feed,
I'm not here complaining,

but I need somewhere to hide,
someone to confide,
not someone to ride,
please help me hide?

In this book I'm reading,
it's hard and makes me cry,
I feel my heart bleeding,
for this character upon I scry.

Back from this book,
I cannot bear to look,
for this author has me shook,
she's caught me with her hook.

For every turn I take,
I feel that much less real,
I feel that much more fake,
do I have a heart to feel?

Comments

[gO_kiLl_yoUrseLFXoxO]

I loved this I can relate to that the hurting for another even if they don't actually exist to feel the hurt themselves

[conflicting actor]

it's powerful for what your writing about

[Lonewolf-Bella]

wow- nice i can totally relate to this one and therefore have a hard time doing helpfull critizism but i really like it. Its simple and yet the words you use make it seem so muchmore

[prettypeach121]

wow.
That happened to me when i was reading the twilight searies. i kept reading & and reading.i couldn't stop myself from reading all 4 books of twilight xd

[Xx_18Sc3n3gIrL18_xX]

I completely LOVED this poem
it was soo beautiful u get a 5 good job!! smile

[Hawkbri]

the only times I have ever tossed a book down, and cursed it, is if it sucks, or is "too perfect".
If you EVER read a Mercedes Lackey novel, you will understand what I felt sometimes. you cannot EVER stop reading one of her Valdemar books.