Achangel

• Artist: stargirl10193
• Description: Originally, it was written about someone I know. When revised, it became something differant but its still for the same person. I hope someone enjoys it.
• Date: 12/24/2008
• Tags: achangel

child of the night
with your hands of white
takes off at midnights flight

as day ends i envy the moon who gazes on thee
than you are here beside me
you clasp me in your icey arms
you linger than you are gone
our secret locked in the catacombs of my heart

as if a dream ethereal beauty
my Archangel you are here
he never speaks but i know his sound
celestial voice i am a demon inside my mind
dispite his "words" he quells my fears

errotically he takes hold of my throat
i close my eyes hypnotised
searing pain i gasp
crinsom rivers flow down my breast
goodbye

child of the night
with your hands of white
takes off at midnights flight

Comments

[Meeko512]

this poem is amazing!!! XD

[XXXXblackbloodXXXX]

I like I love I give it a 5 if I could give you a 10 I would ^_^

[aeusnthaeo]

Agreed, Downer. A very interesting contradictory tone.

[rissyx]

this is reaaally good smile

[pudgy_penguins_rock]

i enjoyed it.

[Deadcant_Closed]

Quite good. I like the tone, it's almost mellow yet intense.