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Part III:Aftermath
Whittling away my time left on earth,
Feeling immense pain since birth,
Striving for a long awaited answer,
to rid myself of this growing cancer,
I run across all my solutions,
Some of them real, but mostly illusions,
To fix this problem, I try so much,
to forget the past, and regain touch,
Yet, I finally realize the true zone,
is not in each solution alone,
but the collective whole,
that replenishes your soul,
So, after crossing the wastes,
of shattered reality, with haste.
I reach my personal oasis,
and leap out of dark stasis,
I re-arrange the parts,
of my multiple hearts,
and my entire spirit,
Is better for it...
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: PArt III - Aftermath
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: Part III/III
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: part aftermath
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Comments (4 Comments)
- SirynECrow - 04/11/2009
- I find it to be a little anti-climactic. Personally I think stopping at the second part would've sufficed to end it.
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- whitejade13 - 12/31/2008
- I'm at a lack for words. 5/5
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- iiReina - 12/29/2008
- OMG! ><
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- Bleuraven123 - 12/20/2008
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astounding
no other word for it!! - Report As Spam