- Stories continue on how it all came to be this way but nobody knows for sure. The darkness just arrived and carried out all of the good that was left of the poor tiny village. The poor villge was left for dead in the wake of 100 men who decidedly passed the empty place as if it didn’t exist. Did it really exist this terribly bleak place where wonderous genius once lived or was it fate that tore it to pieces when the turtle dove flew overhead. The poor creature cried and landed in the dust of top of the tallest building and began to build.
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- wingart - 12/11/2008
- i really dont know lol
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- Tsuki Kurai - 12/11/2008
- Alitare is right, this sucks a**. And if you weren't trying, why the hell did you post it in the arena? :
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- wingart - 12/11/2008
- aww but i was barely trying lol i didnt even know i used poorly 3 times lol
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/11/2008
- Horribly written. Broken as hell. You used "poorly" 3 times. I an unimpressed! 1/5.
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- AmaniPhoebe - 12/09/2008
- lol wow thats funny.great poem.i give u a 4
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- wingart - 12/09/2008
- yep i was bored but didnt want to get kicked off the computer i was bad :XP:
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- Black Ski - 12/08/2008
- Pretty good. lol, you only typed that just to keep the computer? o.o
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