Find Me, Love Me

• Artist: XxChildesh_GamesxX
• Description: just looking for someone who will one day understand me
  plz comment and rate..thxz
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: find love

no one can see the real me
its like im not even there
im invisable to this world
like i dont exsist any more

why cant someone see me
why dont i exsist in your life
why cant you find me

because i need you more than
anything else in this world
im scared of falling without
you by my side

please help me out of this misery
i need you now more than ever
please help me

i need your warm arms protecting
me til the very end
i need to know i can trust you
with my life if need be

please help me out of the darkness
that surrounds me everywhere
i need to know you'll always be there
even tho i dont ask you too

i need to know your out there
waiting to see me with your own eyes
please help me through this night of crying and pain
because i need you now

please someone
love me
only me
and no one else

Comments

[black and white dream]

tch, i read it just fine! It is an awsome poem. ^^

[-Cynical Sexy Bear-]

I suppose the message is decent but illiteracy is still devouring you. You and your poetry.

[Mecca Against Reality]

I agree with Nox, but other than that and the structure, I really liked this poem. My favorite one of yours so far.

[Nox_Eulalie]

What I'd suggest is spelling things out all the way. Use of 'plz' and 'cuz' distracted from the rest of the poem.