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Orange sky, Glistened with blue,
Flying straight flying true
Morning dew nips at my feet
God isn't life sweet?
The changing seasons
My new found freedom gives me new reasons
To live again to start anew
new dreams to pursue, best of all, no you.
So I'll close my shades
close out the blues and grays
I'll sit and write song about the past
and how time flys so fast
I'll cram my brain with all these new sights
getting used to the cold nights
So I don't have an arm around me
Agree to disagree, I'm better off free
- Title: Free
- Artist: WlZ
- Description: Ya just a song I wrote :
- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: free poem lyrics
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Comments (7 Comments)
- lilandrez - 04/13/2009
- if you added some metaphors and smilies, that poem would have been tight
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- IP_BANNER0407 - 04/12/2009
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um... everyone... the description says its a song... lol X3
5/5 - Report As Spam
- x__C r e a m - C h i - 12/03/2008
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Wow i really like this poem =D
very good indeed 5/5
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- MiscalculatedMistakes - 12/01/2008
- you and your poems. lol, imma give it a 5/5 coz i am your heroine afterall =p
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- emo0213 - 12/01/2008
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a littel to happy for me lol jk
ill give it a 4 - Report As Spam
- HollaBack17 - 12/01/2008
- This is really good. I'm rating it a 4 or a 5.
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- Nikki4815 - 12/01/2008
- I like it...*thinks very hard* OWW! That hurt *smiles and laughs* Yeah, you get a 4/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"
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