The darkness

• Artist: SyXyS
• Description: I write what feels right
  and it comes out very well
  .............when I'm bored out ov my mind.
  Please, comment my poem.
  Thank you.
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: darkness

As I sit in the darkness
I see what I wish I could
The memories and dreams
They taunt and torture me
The darkness hides the truth
The truth lies in shadow, laughing
The dark envelopes me as I look
All I see are shadows dancing about
As the shadow draw closer to me
My insanity grows

Comments

[Twiggity Twang]

Phenomenal...that is very good....

[Celtic_RosePetal]

oh wow this is fenomenal! i love the emotion behind it and how you use imagery

[Christine Zoey Saint]

that's good write more please ^_^