Spider Spider

• Artist: Blackmoon_Coyote
• Description: well, its my first submit. And i thought of it when i was sailing a year ago.
  my partner threated to throw me over board if i didn't shut up. oh well enjoy. (PS its about a spider- in a boat).
• Date: 11/24/2008
• Tags: spider spider

Spider Spider, in the boat
Take good care of this note,
Through wind and folly,
Rain and Snow,
There is but one thing you should know,

There comes a time in future days,
When certain decissions have to be made,
So when you go to the breakers yard,
Your life is going to be made very hard,

So when axes come down with mighty clangs,
And hammers roar down with mighty bangs,
There is but one thing i should suggest,
That you leave this place and make a new nest,

So heed my warning,
Spider in the boat,
I'm not telling you again this note,
I'm telling you the answer now,
It would be a brillant idea If you left this boat now.

Comments

[purplemajic]

I really like this. It just really cute and fun. (i like spiders by the way)

[Megthatsme24]

It's a wonderful poem and I wouldn't have any complaints if it wasn't for the last two lines. They sound awkward and don't work with the flow of the poem. Fix those and you have a nice bit of poetry here!