Emptiness

• Artist: Skyfeather323
• Description: A Poem For My Love, Who Has Passed From This Lonely, Desolate Place
• Date: 11/21/2008
• Tags: emptiness loneliness sadness death

I lay in my bed
Bleeding
Crying
Internally

I cannot rise
From this place
It sucks me into the
Cavernous hole that it is
I wail to no-one

My eyeballs have been
Dry-heaved
My heart is splintered like
Broken glass

I miss you
And I cannot
Ever see you again
You have melded into the
Universe as so many
Others have

But the wound created
Never heals
I miss you........

Comments

[dani_grl2009]

That was so good. Hey I've never lost a boyfriend or nething like that, but I did lose my dad. I know that it seems horrible now and you feel like life will never go on, but it will. It takes time, but slowly the pain lessens and you go days without thinking about the person. I would love to say that it will go away, but truthfully I doubt it ever will.

[Skyfeather323]

Thanks everyone 4 comments, Bella, just write from ur heart. Yes tiger i lost my bf last year but it still hurts. guess it always will

[iResell]

Beautiful Poem...your .5 away from being in first....but I AM THERE...good luck a lot of this will be inbetween you and me ....B-E-A-Utiful poem. Goodluck

[redrosefire44]

wow very deep

[tiger_grl_1413]

so did you lose your gf(or bf) or something? if thats the case im really sorry. its sad

[pvt_pixie]

omg this is real great i was wondering if you could give me some tips 4 y writin

[Nyclone]

Wow, that's deep...