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In Front of My Eye's
In front of my eyes,
I saw nation's fight other nation's
In front of my eyes,
They make themselves tremble
In front of my eyes,
I saw murderer's that murder
In front of my eyes,
Tears was mix with blood
In front of my eyes,
My family were killed, I tremble
In front of my eyes,
I face the mirror
In front of my eyes,
I saw the Murderer.
by M.M.M Yuki Frozen
- by Yuki Frozen |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/01/2008 |
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- Title: In Front of My Eye's
- Artist: Yuki Frozen
- Description: Some says that it's a bit annoying how I repeat the phrase "In Front of My eye's" on this. Okey then just read it. Enjoy? >.<
- Date: 11/01/2008
- Tags: tragic
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Comments (7 Comments)
- XxForgotten Memory232xX - 10/25/2011
- I loved it smile
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- Jinmei Destiny - 01/02/2010
- It was thrilling for me. and the the twist makes it more lovely.
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- Yuki Frozen - 09/04/2009
- Thanks lunary ^^
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- Luunare - 09/03/2009
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I like it. It's called repetition, and it is commonly used in poetry. So it's not annoying.
It reminds me of this book I was reading... - Report As Spam
- Yuki Frozen - 09/02/2009
- comment pls
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- Yorukie Masaoto - 03/18/2009
- ehheeheheh just drippin by.
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- littlebunnyfoofoo9 - 12/14/2008
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I don't think the phrase: "In Front of My eye's" is annoying.
Very nice peom - Report As Spam
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